Vigilance 2
Vigilance fishing2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
Excellent, atmospheric and resonant writing. I really like what you do with your language choices here and the poem is nicely framed with effective rhyme. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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Excellent, atmospheric and resonant writing. I really like what you do with your language choices here and the poem is nicely framed with effective rhyme. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
Comment from Lisa Cuff
Quite the storm! Was it worth the cramming of fish? Apparently. Nice instillation of fear as the reader watches the boat give way to weather. Nice rhythm and rhyme.
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Quite the storm! Was it worth the cramming of fish? Apparently. Nice instillation of fear as the reader watches the boat give way to weather. Nice rhythm and rhyme.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
