Grief
My heartache has not ended43 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Ramona, This is a very lovely, but very sad poem you have penned about missing your mom. You used great heartbreaking words that tells of a heart that has been broken from loss. I can totally relate as my mother died at 69 from lung cancer. We were very close too. I pray the Lord bless you and comfort you each day by His Holy Spirit. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Ramona, This is a very lovely, but very sad poem you have penned about missing your mom. You used great heartbreaking words that tells of a heart that has been broken from loss. I can totally relate as my mother died at 69 from lung cancer. We were very close too. I pray the Lord bless you and comfort you each day by His Holy Spirit. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Blessings Teri and my condolences for the loss of your Mother. Love, Ramona
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Teri, thank you. I'm glad it touched you. Your words mean a lot to me.
Comment from jessizero
Many people think that there is a time limit on grief. I know there is not. Your heartbreak came across strongly in this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you. I am sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Many people think that there is a time limit on grief. I know there is not. Your heartbreak came across strongly in this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you. I am sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind and understanding reviewing.
Blessings,
Ramona
Comment from Bryce 1
This reminds me of my mom. If I had died, I think it woulda killed her. This is a sad and brooding poem that pairs with the picture to create a scene that's too sad for tears, only a blank stare with blank feelings that are alone on an island without the hope of rescue.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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This reminds me of my mom. If I had died, I think it woulda killed her. This is a sad and brooding poem that pairs with the picture to create a scene that's too sad for tears, only a blank stare with blank feelings that are alone on an island without the hope of rescue.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Dear Bryce,
Thank you for such an insightful review. You know, it kills me that my mom went first, but I was her only child, I think she would have been lost without me.
Comment from BermyBye50
Ramona,
This is an excellent entry in the No Rules Poetry Contest. You've captured in this well-written poem all the emotional stages of grief following the loss of your 73 year old mother. The rhyming flows well and the imagery woven throughout your poem speaks to the common experience of grieving following the loss of a loved one.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Ramona,
This is an excellent entry in the No Rules Poetry Contest. You've captured in this well-written poem all the emotional stages of grief following the loss of your 73 year old mother. The rhyming flows well and the imagery woven throughout your poem speaks to the common experience of grieving following the loss of a loved one.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Dear Eugene,
Thank you so much for the heartfelt and enthusiastic review, I also appreciate your well wishes!
Warm Regards,
Ramona
Comment from Tina Crute
I am so sorry for your loss, truly. She must've been pretty special. I think this contest was a good one to post this poem in so you aren't bound by structure to express your feelings. You expressed them well here and I wish you well in the contest. Your mom would be proud of you:)
Tina
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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I am so sorry for your loss, truly. She must've been pretty special. I think this contest was a good one to post this poem in so you aren't bound by structure to express your feelings. You expressed them well here and I wish you well in the contest. Your mom would be proud of you:)
Tina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Dear Tina,
Thank you for such a kind, compassionate review.
Blessings,
Ramona
Comment from Barry Penfold
Heartfelt and lovely tribute to a loved one passed. Nice rhyming and image supplied is excellent. Thanks for the notes. Make sure you keep writing and that you have an excellent day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Heartfelt and lovely tribute to a loved one passed. Nice rhyming and image supplied is excellent. Thanks for the notes. Make sure you keep writing and that you have an excellent day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barry, a warm and heartfelt review.
Blessings,
Ramona
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem, albeit a sad one, and there are griefs that we manage, but never get over. Some things on earth we just don't understand, but will one day. Thank you for sharing - I hope you do well in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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A beautiful poem, albeit a sad one, and there are griefs that we manage, but never get over. Some things on earth we just don't understand, but will one day. Thank you for sharing - I hope you do well in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Dear Wendy,
Thank you so very much for your thoughtful review and we'll wishes.
Blessings,
Ramona
Comment from karenina
We miss our loved ones every day...it seems grief is magnified as we gather for a holiday and the hole in our heart feels even bigger.
I list my mom at sixty...36 years ago, now.
I'm sorry for your loss.
We'll meet again in God's time!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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We miss our loved ones every day...it seems grief is magnified as we gather for a holiday and the hole in our heart feels even bigger.
I list my mom at sixty...36 years ago, now.
I'm sorry for your loss.
We'll meet again in God's time!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Dear Karenina,
Thank you for your thoughtful review. I?m sorry for your loss too.
Blessings,
Ramona
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I feel her presence, still...
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I feel my mom's too.
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Moms are like that. They always find a way!
Comment from estory
Your poem speaks to the grief we all feel when someone that close to us passes away and we are separated from them. I asked those questions too when my dad died. Why? Why all this pain and suffering, what does a life amount to if this is the way it ends? But we have to have faith in the life everlasting, that Jesus will wipe all the tears from our eyes, that we will be reunited with those that have passed before us. I wrote a story called The Door into the Dark on this very subject. It's in my collection In Real Time in my portfolio if you want to check it out. estory
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Your poem speaks to the grief we all feel when someone that close to us passes away and we are separated from them. I asked those questions too when my dad died. Why? Why all this pain and suffering, what does a life amount to if this is the way it ends? But we have to have faith in the life everlasting, that Jesus will wipe all the tears from our eyes, that we will be reunited with those that have passed before us. I wrote a story called The Door into the Dark on this very subject. It's in my collection In Real Time in my portfolio if you want to check it out. estory
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Dear estory,
Thank you for the kind and sympathetic review. I will check your story out.
Blessings,
Ramona
Comment from lindafisher
This poem is a lovely tribute to your late mum. I'm sorry your pain is still so raw, I think of my mum every day and probably always will. Well written Ramona
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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This poem is a lovely tribute to your late mum. I'm sorry your pain is still so raw, I think of my mum every day and probably always will. Well written Ramona
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Dear Linda,
Thank You!
Blessings,
Ramona
