Comment from Aiona

Excellent

It is around 45 degrees Fahrenheit outside my house, but your poem brings warm thoughts to mind. I love how the poem has rhyme and a bit of regular meter. And it does fit the prompt about being about Spring!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Yes. Strange time for this contest!

Comment from créateur d'histoire

Excellent

I loved your writing. You had great phasing such as " unfrozen noses" and magical bliss". I think you conveyed the image of spring with gusto. My only issue was that the font was a bit hard to read. However, you're poem kept me captivated.Nice Job!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

It?s taking a beating, but I enjoyed writing the feelings that Spring brings.

I did switch the font by the way. Good catch.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the colour and the warmth here in your ambient post for spring. A time when flowers show their coloured faces and lift the mood, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you, Dolly. I?m gonna mess with the colors a bit!

Comment from Alison Greenwood

Good

I love the imagery and the way the poem has been set out. It's a beautiful uplifting poem. Spring can be so meaningful, but is usually associated with fresh growth and new beginnings.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thanks.