Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, we all need a good rain to help wash away the hurt. Doves mate for life and are monogamous , unlike many humans. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed the presentation. Good luck with the contest.
Life in the tranches (trenches??)
One slice on the branch (not sure what a slice of a branch is)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

We do need the healing rain from God to wash away all the pain of our lives. Best wishes in the contest!

I wasn't sure about:
Life in the tranches (trenches?)
One slice on the branch (what is a slice on the branch?)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is a sense of loss in these words and most birds mate for life and when they lose their mate they don't tend to mate again, a poignant write Iza, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I think love can never be lost because love stays. I've done my research so I can share that. Love is there for each person, and it will never leave. Believe. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023