In Due Season
Australian weather particularly in Victoria can be erratic3 total reviews
Comment from Janis M.
I really appreciate the authors notes here, because it does help to make the connection about the weather and the season. Colorado, USA is also very temperamental with its weather no matter the season. When I visited, there was a day where there was not a single cloud in the sky, and within an hour, it was thundering and raining so hard, it filled someone's car up with water. (They had regretfully left their top down.)
Structure wise, the meter and flow of the poem is very neat and tidy. It's consistent, making it a very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I really appreciate the authors notes here, because it does help to make the connection about the weather and the season. Colorado, USA is also very temperamental with its weather no matter the season. When I visited, there was a day where there was not a single cloud in the sky, and within an hour, it was thundering and raining so hard, it filled someone's car up with water. (They had regretfully left their top down.)
Structure wise, the meter and flow of the poem is very neat and tidy. It's consistent, making it a very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Janis. I appreciate your kind words. I am gladyou enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As we come into winter, you come into summer. I don't suppose it ever gets as cold as England in Melbourne, but you might still need a blanket on the bed until the summer heat arrives, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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As we come into winter, you come into summer. I don't suppose it ever gets as cold as England in Melbourne, but you might still need a blanket on the bed until the summer heat arrives, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Oh yeah I know that the UK is colder than Australia Our one and only trip back in 1989 was reasonable until the day we went to Oban. Boy oh boy! I am still trying to plan another trip Tom has not been outside Australia.
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I have been to Oban! A lovely little town in Scotland with the Isle of Mull just a few miles away. My husband and I spent a holiday on that island and I shall never forget the mighty winds that nearly swept us away, love Dolly x
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This excellent work, but I learned a lot that I never did before. I was born and raised in NYC then lived on Long Island, NY. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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This excellent work, but I learned a lot that I never did before. I was born and raised in NYC then lived on Long Island, NY. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you Alex, that is good to know about the imagery
