-A Sweetened Hollow-
Spiritual2 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
This reads really well now you have made some changes. I did not mean to offend but your poem was hard to read prior.
You certainly have a mastery of the English language and the imagery created by your words was magical. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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This reads really well now you have made some changes. I did not mean to offend but your poem was hard to read prior.
You certainly have a mastery of the English language and the imagery created by your words was magical. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I have updated the poem, will you please re-read?
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I just read your words again. I have changed my score. It is beautifully written and emotive.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I'm far from an interpreter of poetry, Gordon. I enjoy reading it because of the feeling and not because I understand the author's exact meaning.
My barometer is the emotion of the words, and you always seem to push that button for me. I loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I'm far from an interpreter of poetry, Gordon. I enjoy reading it because of the feeling and not because I understand the author's exact meaning.
My barometer is the emotion of the words, and you always seem to push that button for me. I loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you ever so much, have a splendid day and be in goodnesses cheer.