Comment from RFL

Excellent

I enjoyed this well thought out poem about spring. It paired well with beautiful image of that season that you created. Good luck in the contest.

Best,
Mim

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I loved how you described the changing of the seasons, from winter into spring. The imagery that you captured of the "warming sun melting winters icy grip", and "trees, once naked in the cold now dress with leafy finesse," was really well thought out and I could picture this so clearly in my mind. You've done a brilliant job here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a truly beautiful, well written piece of free verse poetry in which you have used personification and some vividly descriptive imagery which great effect. Good use of alliteration too. Exquisite!! Good luck. Sorry I have no sixes!!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback. Appreciated.