Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is unusual phrasing for a potter's wheel image. It could definitely look like that! I remember hearing about exsanguination on a murder mystery TV show. Definitely a more startling word. A reminder to put an apostrophe so it says potter's red wheel.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

That's great, I'm so happy you like it. It's definitely a dark subject but the word just worked. Thank you for reading. Thank you for offering your thoughts.
I appreciate you your comments and your support thank you again!

Comment from Chuck Keller

Excellent

Expressive and poignant post, Lea.
Sometimes few words CAN say so much.
Thank you for sharing this one with us.
It's always a pleasure to see your name on a review or poem.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you Chuck glad you like it! I do like to write poetry abstract and rhyming poem. Things to do with history I'd like to I love history. Thank you Chuck in case I haven't told you I appreciate you!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

What a cool slant on an everyday commodity. Now THAT is the sign of a creative writer. I bet this will get far in the contest...hopefully right down to the Winner's Circle. Good luck. xoxo

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you, I'm proud you like it, my friend. I like poetry and stuff too. I thank you for commenting always and hearing your Thoughts on the matter always appreciated by me! 😊

reply by Rachelle Allen on 16-Nov-2023

xo

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have no idea what the word (Exanguination) means Lea, I tried looking it up, but the dictionary did not know either. I would consider changing that word to something else for the contes, it is just a suggestion for you, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Sorry there should be an s after x exsanguination means to bleed out. Thank you, Dolly for your awesome review as always. I appreciate you! I like the line that your sonnets are taken too. Dick and there's a cool dude!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautifully done, Lea! I wonder if you yourself are a potter? Love the imagery of blood which reinforces the, almost, magically crafted creativity that we see here. The skill of the potter is always a source of wonder to me. Your first word should read Ex(s)anguination and might need an author's note? Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thanks Debbie! Glad you like it! Thanks to for reading I appreciate your review on it. I like poetry too. I appreciate your review as always. And I'm going back with your Eagle eye. Rachelle's Eagle eye and all the eagles eyes out there and making one big colossus eyeball who will miss nothing! Lol. Thank you so much again!

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I've meant to tell you before that you are an excellent poet. I've enjoyed the little poems you've scattered among you posts. This one is nicely worded. It should well in the contest. It is like the pot being cast on the potters wheel must endure some real torture before emerging beautiful. Sort of a metaphor for your life.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you. I'm so glad you like it. Yeah, I like boy tree too. Especially the abstract time for I like rhyming Poe trees. Well thank you for that fine compliment! And thank you for hanging around with me going through this process Hope this i'm shining where you are at!