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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a beautiful picture of the river and the wonderful wild flowers in purple. A great haiku was born. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, Aryr.

    I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 15-Nov-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, God will work in our lives if we allow Him to do so. He has done it for me on numerous occasions, even when I've fought Him. I'm just glad He offers grace. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Yes, God has saved me and walked by my side during the darkest times in my life.

    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was just so picturesque. I loved the imagery. I could see the specks of purple color against the green of the growth. The water shimmering as the reflection came to view. This was lovely. Gretchen

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen.

    I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye
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those purple flower pics look really cool!
i can totally see them being unattended and growing wild

nice haiku with vivid imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I have heard that slogan but never knew that it came from the AA. Interesting! I do like the observation that the purple flowers grow and bloom without anyone's help but God's.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Yes, beauty is all around us and without our control. It's up to God and nature.

    There was a time that I abused drugs and alcohol but with AA and NA I got sober. I have28 years clean and sober. The program works. It's very spiritual and the kindred family offers the support that's needed.

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Love

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 15-Nov-2023
    I'm so proud of you! And you've been helping others! ❤️❤️
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very lovely and well written post you have penned. When we let go and let God have His way with our life amazing things start to happen. He is the creator of all things and He loves us all so much! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from jim vecchio
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If God cares for those flowers, how much more will He care for you and me? This was a beautiful post backed by a vivid color scheme and you did it in eight words. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by jim vecchio on 15-Nov-2023
    Nothing I love better than hugs from a Master Poet!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    LoL
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Just as God takes good care of those gorgeous flowers that are seemingly unattended, so does He take care of all of His Children. This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alexan

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hug