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Comment from CrystieCookie999
I was feeling more of a sense of relief on reading this selection, because you were able to get to a friend's house. It sounds as if she is/was the practical type.
Little fixes:
It was also mentioned that there could be a physical altercation although it's heresay.
I think you mean hearsay.
I did sometimes yes...need attention.
I think I would put a comma after sometimes.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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I was feeling more of a sense of relief on reading this selection, because you were able to get to a friend's house. It sounds as if she is/was the practical type.
Little fixes:
It was also mentioned that there could be a physical altercation although it's heresay.
I think you mean hearsay.
I did sometimes yes...need attention.
I think I would put a comma after sometimes.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, I so appreciate you. I really do you're very Abbott. Reader and an Abbott reviewer so very good at it. Thank you. I appreciate you and I hope your day is amazing!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
first I will comment on your staying at your friend's house. It almost sounds as if you might not be so welcome. It's all in the past, so I guess it doesn't matter, but that's the way it appears.
As to whether you should stay where you are or go, I would think that there would be some kind of publicly funded law service or perhaps you should let the social service people you're dealing with know what kind of issues you're dealing with, with your mom. You don't want them (your family )having any say in your future. There must be a way to get your name changed if you so desired as well, though I don't know what kind of issues that might cause. Do you have a relationship with your sons? It might be a good idea to let them know what you've got planned. You're a survivor, you just don't want to be put in a situation where you have to count on the government or anyone else for that matter. Good luck gal.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
first I will comment on your staying at your friend's house. It almost sounds as if you might not be so welcome. It's all in the past, so I guess it doesn't matter, but that's the way it appears.
As to whether you should stay where you are or go, I would think that there would be some kind of publicly funded law service or perhaps you should let the social service people you're dealing with know what kind of issues you're dealing with, with your mom. You don't want them (your family )having any say in your future. There must be a way to get your name changed if you so desired as well, though I don't know what kind of issues that might cause. Do you have a relationship with your sons? It might be a good idea to let them know what you've got planned. You're a survivor, you just don't want to be put in a situation where you have to count on the government or anyone else for that matter. Good luck gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate you and all your wise comments. Oh yes, I don't have fun comments throughout my life. My mother changed my name six times yes, she wasn't exactly the most above board person. Yeah, at the time when I was a kid. All I cared about was being free.
Trying to be a kid I was too late for that my childhood was gone. As for right now, you may be interested to know that I've received case number. I'm a lawyer who says that uh this is gonna blow a few things up. Thank you again my friend I appreciate you! I always look forward to your readings. Do you have some good ideas too? By the way, just so you know, thank you again!
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Hello Lea,
I'm glad to hear that things are moving forward here. I hope that the outcome is satisfying for your.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm glad you've gotten to the part of the story where you are away from your parent's house, and I hope you find safety.
To answer your question about leaving, my main concern would be about safety. If you are not safe where you are, and have the means to leave, then I would say you may be better off away from evil people who may try to do harm. I have a question.
Does your mother, or others in your family have access to what you are writing? If they are reading on FanStory, you can block them from your profile page. (just want you to know) Safety should be your main concern.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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I'm glad you've gotten to the part of the story where you are away from your parent's house, and I hope you find safety.
To answer your question about leaving, my main concern would be about safety. If you are not safe where you are, and have the means to leave, then I would say you may be better off away from evil people who may try to do harm. I have a question.
Does your mother, or others in your family have access to what you are writing? If they are reading on FanStory, you can block them from your profile page. (just want you to know) Safety should be your main concern.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Oh yeah, I gave my sister a link in order to do but it's okay if my mom reads it she can't do anything about the past, but you can do something about the present and the future. So this is what concerns me a lot so I probably will go. It's just a matter of saving the means to do so. Thank you for your review I very much appreciated. Thank you for your concern to your empathy. And your answer to my question is most appreciated. Thanks again!
Comment from damommy
you need to get away from wherever you are. I wouldn't put anything past these people. Your life could be in danger. So many ways for them to exact revenge. You've come with so many ways to survive, you need to keep that way of thinking.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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you need to get away from wherever you are. I wouldn't put anything past these people. Your life could be in danger. So many ways for them to exact revenge. You've come with so many ways to survive, you need to keep that way of thinking.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you though Scott stood across my mind certainly did. I am working on it, I will have to save that I will get out just as soon as I can. Thank you for your fine review, I'm always so happy to see you and others have free thing to say and offer such sage advice and the corrections and the edits. And all of that stuff is so helpful to me. Thanks again. Enjoy your evening!
Comment from Jim Wile
I hope you were able to tell your friend and her parents what was really going on in your family. If so, I don't know how they could possibly turn you away and not get involved in helping you. I guess we'll find out soon.
You've posed an interesting question. I'd say the answer depends on a few things:
1. Is this a safety issue? Are you in possible danger if you remain where you are? It sounds like you have the means to defend yourself, but if people are really desperate, which it sounds like your mother and other family members might be, it's hard to foresee the extent of the efforts they might make to silence you. They might burn your house down, for example. It sounds like you are dealing with crazy, unpredictable people in your family.
2. How difficult would it be for you to at least temporarily move out of the area, where they couldn't find you, to complete the story? Are you in a position financially to do that?
Lea, I think only you, who knows your situation so well, can evaluate the risk involved with staying put. - Jim
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I hope you were able to tell your friend and her parents what was really going on in your family. If so, I don't know how they could possibly turn you away and not get involved in helping you. I guess we'll find out soon.
You've posed an interesting question. I'd say the answer depends on a few things:
1. Is this a safety issue? Are you in possible danger if you remain where you are? It sounds like you have the means to defend yourself, but if people are really desperate, which it sounds like your mother and other family members might be, it's hard to foresee the extent of the efforts they might make to silence you. They might burn your house down, for example. It sounds like you are dealing with crazy, unpredictable people in your family.
2. How difficult would it be for you to at least temporarily move out of the area, where they couldn't find you, to complete the story? Are you in a position financially to do that?
Lea, I think only you, who knows your situation so well, can evaluate the risk involved with staying put. - Jim
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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My situation here is precarious. Health, safety and reputation are compromised. I will go. I have no means at the moment but I am tenacious and will figure it out! I do have a destination which is much better and I can be anonymous.
Thank you Jim! Your compassion is great! I appreciate all you say and your smarts are showing! Lol have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I was engrossed in your introduction and impressed by how strong you're sounding now. Even being a reader of your trials feels daunting, given the background that you're so vividly sharing. But you must, of course, keep safe although I think the worst of that intimidation is probably now passed. I'm not going to correct anything in the intro but it does need another proofread. I would only comment on "There was nothing else (I could) do." I sincerely hope your friend can be a saviour for you. I'm optimistic. Another excellent write. Debbie x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I was engrossed in your introduction and impressed by how strong you're sounding now. Even being a reader of your trials feels daunting, given the background that you're so vividly sharing. But you must, of course, keep safe although I think the worst of that intimidation is probably now passed. I'm not going to correct anything in the intro but it does need another proofread. I would only comment on "There was nothing else (I could) do." I sincerely hope your friend can be a saviour for you. I'm optimistic. Another excellent write. Debbie x
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Again, that's awesome. I'm here to offer your that's with your Eagle. Eye so great and appreciate it very much. I am almost ready to go back and do rewrite and keep in comments and suggestions for edit. And have some great advice coming my way and help as well. And you're part of that so thank you again!
Comment from BethShelby
As to your question as to whether you should, I don't have the answer. Many people are writing books while their lives are being threatened. Most are political and I would think threats you get aren't as seriou but living with an uncle you mother can contact might cause. If she had way to find out what you ar doing seems better to me. Does you she know about this site? Anyone can get on it and read even if your are't a member
The girls mother where you're hoping to stay back when you left home seems uptight and judgemental. I'm wondering how well that will work out. I hope I'm wrong. The fact you never go home again sounds good.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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As to your question as to whether you should, I don't have the answer. Many people are writing books while their lives are being threatened. Most are political and I would think threats you get aren't as seriou but living with an uncle you mother can contact might cause. If she had way to find out what you ar doing seems better to me. Does you she know about this site? Anyone can get on it and read even if your are't a member
The girls mother where you're hoping to stay back when you left home seems uptight and judgemental. I'm wondering how well that will work out. I hope I'm wrong. The fact you never go home again sounds good.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you again, ha yeah, my mother knows it's being written. I'm sure she can read it all she wants. I have nothing to fear I have the truth, and I have proof on my side. She can be loud and screech. If she wishes that would be on her more mud. I don't have to do anything just sit back and let karma do her thing. Yes, she managed to get a membership for whatever hon go ahead or I can block her. Currently she's louder's my name with anyone who will listen. It's difficult to do with people around to give you nasty looks and say nasty things get nasty messages from nasty people who know nothing. All perpetuated by the author of BS, my mother. Thank you again my friend for offering your wonderful comments and your curiosity. I quite like as you know. I appreciate you have a great night!
Comment from JSD
More stunning writing, dear Lea. And in answer to your question, I would definitely go elsewhere, change my name and loosen off those ties from the past. I often feel I want to do that, and may still do so. If your can financially, then why not?
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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More stunning writing, dear Lea. And in answer to your question, I would definitely go elsewhere, change my name and loosen off those ties from the past. I often feel I want to do that, and may still do so. If your can financially, then why not?
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Things are so we say precarious and it would be necessary for me to go. But it's something I have to save up for such is life. Doesn't matter what they do to me. They can't stop me. I can't take anything for me. So I mean, as far as stuff, they've got my stuff already, but probably don't get me. They can bark and moan and climb a thousand mountains that won't happen. Again I thank you my friend, and for your kind offering of advice. Yes, indeed I will make plans to see what I can do again. I appreciate your reviews and your thoughthe sun is shining here. I hope it's shining for you!
Comment from Chuck Keller
Safe at last.
What a relief it must have been to finally get free from that evil, dangerous place
I love the "Jack and Jill" at the end.
Thanks for the smile.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Safe at last.
What a relief it must have been to finally get free from that evil, dangerous place
I love the "Jack and Jill" at the end.
Thanks for the smile.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Yeah that's from a comedian He's a canadian comedium named Andrew Dice Clay. I've got humor from all john russ i'm an equal opportunity offender l o l. I appreciate you as always my friend Chuck nice to see you here! Thank you again my friend you're awesome!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a relief! A safe house with a friend who welcomed you in. at last, things are looking up for the good guys in this story!!!
As far as your question as to whether or not you should leave, I have these questions of my own:
1) Does your mother know that you have given the rest of your book and its necessary notes --including the full names and pertinent information about them to others? (i.e. people who have no family connection to you) along with specific instructions about what to do in the event you suddenly go "missing"? Or you're harmed? Do these mind-game people understand that THEY are the ones now at risk if a problem arises? That might make them cool their jets a little, trying to intimidate you from furthering your cause. You've already done the work of setting safety nets up in many, MANY areas for the express purpose of not allowing this story to die.
2.) Is there a threat to the person whose house you're in?
3.) Do you have the means/motivation to leave?
4.) If you made a Pros and Cons list of of Why I Should Leave/Why I Should Stay Put, which would be longer?
We've discussed this before, but it might bear reiteration: you CAN make this book no longer visible to people who are not FS members. And should they BECOME members, you can mute them on here, too. Ask Karenina or Debi Pick Marquette for help in that area; they use it often and have it down to a science.
xoxoxo
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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What a relief! A safe house with a friend who welcomed you in. at last, things are looking up for the good guys in this story!!!
As far as your question as to whether or not you should leave, I have these questions of my own:
1) Does your mother know that you have given the rest of your book and its necessary notes --including the full names and pertinent information about them to others? (i.e. people who have no family connection to you) along with specific instructions about what to do in the event you suddenly go "missing"? Or you're harmed? Do these mind-game people understand that THEY are the ones now at risk if a problem arises? That might make them cool their jets a little, trying to intimidate you from furthering your cause. You've already done the work of setting safety nets up in many, MANY areas for the express purpose of not allowing this story to die.
2.) Is there a threat to the person whose house you're in?
3.) Do you have the means/motivation to leave?
4.) If you made a Pros and Cons list of of Why I Should Leave/Why I Should Stay Put, which would be longer?
We've discussed this before, but it might bear reiteration: you CAN make this book no longer visible to people who are not FS members. And should they BECOME members, you can mute them on here, too. Ask Karenina or Debi Pick Marquette for help in that area; they use it often and have it down to a science.
xoxoxo
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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I would like to answer all your questions. And I'm going to send you a personal message. If you don't mind cause there's personal information. I'm going to part to you if you're okay with that.