Rainbow Tableau
Japanese Poetry Club entry- tableau26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
What? This needs one more review to become an "All Time Best" -- well let's take care of THAT right now! I love the "harmonious hues" line...and the "colorful bridge" that is the rainbow. You have such a way with phrasing, Jessica. Alliteration kisses this sweetly!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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What? This needs one more review to become an "All Time Best" -- well let's take care of THAT right now! I love the "harmonious hues" line...and the "colorful bridge" that is the rainbow. You have such a way with phrasing, Jessica. Alliteration kisses this sweetly!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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You are the BEST! Xo
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:)
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It's fun to give that one "more" review...
Comment from BenThrone
You've introduced me to yet another form today, and again I am very impressed by what you did with it. You perfectly capture the moment when the storm lets up and a rainbow emerges. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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You've introduced me to yet another form today, and again I am very impressed by what you did with it. You perfectly capture the moment when the storm lets up and a rainbow emerges. Beautiful.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Ben. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Xo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the Japanese Poetry Club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines.
I love the imagery, metaphor, and alliteration in your tableau
storm's scent
light pierces clouds
harmonious hues
Good job,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you for participating in the Japanese Poetry Club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines.
I love the imagery, metaphor, and alliteration in your tableau
storm's scent
light pierces clouds
harmonious hues
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Gypsy. Xoxo
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very descriptive poem, so I believe you've learned well. I'm always interested in different forms of poetry, although I rarely attempt them. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a very descriptive poem, so I believe you've learned well. I'm always interested in different forms of poetry, although I rarely attempt them. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful Tableau club entry with us. Your Tableau is as beautiful as the artwork you chose to accompany it. Both are very peaceful. I enjoyed reading and viewing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful Tableau club entry with us. Your Tableau is as beautiful as the artwork you chose to accompany it. Both are very peaceful. I enjoyed reading and viewing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you xoxo
Comment from Lisasview
I am thrilled to see that this poem you wrote actually showed up on my following list!!
Lovely poem dear Jessica with such a wonderful image.
Lisa'sview
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I am thrilled to see that this poem you wrote actually showed up on my following list!!
Lovely poem dear Jessica with such a wonderful image.
Lisa'sview
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Yay! lol thanks so much, my friend! Xo
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You are quite welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Sally Law
Such a lovely tableu, my friend. Thr rainbow reminds us of the harmony of nature and God's promises in the rain.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and my very best for the poetry challenge.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Such a lovely tableu, my friend. Thr rainbow reminds us of the harmony of nature and God's promises in the rain.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and my very best for the poetry challenge.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my Sally! Xoxo
Comment from samantha0930
Your poem is a good version of the kind presented in the writing prompt. It's a very good description creating an image of a rainbow. It would help a little if you make the beginning of the 1st line in lowercase too so that all your lines have a consistent style. :)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Your poem is a good version of the kind presented in the writing prompt. It's a very good description creating an image of a rainbow. It would help a little if you make the beginning of the 1st line in lowercase too so that all your lines have a consistent style. :)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Samantha!
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery that creates a vivid word picture.
-It also appeals to the senses with sight and scent.
-The mood is peaceful with
"the colorful bridge
sweeps across the sky."
-Very well done; good luck!!!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery that creates a vivid word picture.
-It also appeals to the senses with sight and scent.
-The mood is peaceful with
"the colorful bridge
sweeps across the sky."
-Very well done; good luck!!!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam! Xoxo
Comment from royowen
This is sort of like a reverse ekphrastic poem, but I think all poetry should creat imagery, like a parable, as the prodigal son, many created but the Master Poet Jesus, beautifully written Jessica great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This is sort of like a reverse ekphrastic poem, but I think all poetry should creat imagery, like a parable, as the prodigal son, many created but the Master Poet Jesus, beautifully written Jessica great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you Roy!
