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Comment from BethShelby
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It looks as though they have found a place where they would both like to stay a while. I can imagine how the news of Ben's arrest and prison escape might have gotten around without people knowing he had been cleared. It is good thing God is watching over him.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
    Thank you for your very nice review.
    But hold on to your seat!
Comment from lyenochka
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It's good that Ben met this pastor, I think. Unless you'll surprise us with more about this man that this first hospitable introduction. I wonder why Ben doesn't have the documentation or news article with him. Interesting dilemma. News traveled slowly then but rumors still travel fast just like now.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
    Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from JSD
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Not just a great story, but now we get advice on fruit and when to eat it! You are excelling yourself, Wayne. Excellent stuff and the hotel welcome was gorgeous.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you. I really appreciate your very nice review.
Comment from Wendy G
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That sounds like a warm welcome and a good solution for Ben and Beth to live there in peace, and with Ben carrying appropriate papers to prevent further trouble. Well written Wayne. Yet somehow I feel that won't be the end of drama in his life.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Smiley face here!
    Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Quotation marks at "First folks to come up from the south . . .

That four meals a day and an early bedtime sounds good to me!

Reading this reminds me of how slowly news used to travel. You couldn't just pick up a phone and call for confirmation.

Fortuna, huh? Will this be it? I keep wondering when they will settle down and have that child, but it may not been until the end of the story.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Thank you for your kind review.
    This would be a good time to hang on tight.
Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. Does nodding mean they are going to stay? I look forward to seeing what happens. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much.
    One day at a time, though settling down does look good.
Comment from royowen
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So Ben is plugged in to the heavenly Telegraph after Al, he knows when the Lord's voice a scripture, my sheep know my voice and hear me. I know the essence of that voice, one must.respond to that voice. I wonder if the jailing will reconcile, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your review.
reply by royowen on 14-Nov-2023
    Most welcome
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Why didn't I think to ask you about that before? He is soooo right. He needs documentation to carry with him. I doubt he would enjoy small town hospitality in all the towns. Good Writing as usual. Karen

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for your very nice review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 14-Nov-2023
    u R welcome
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The minister in Fortuna has a good idea to keep Ben from being arrested again if he doesn't have papers to prove his exoneration. It also sounds like a good place to live, nice temperatures and rain.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Beautiful country!
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
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Ran out of six's, BRO. Well, they made to heaven or what they call it and I suppose it is compared to other places. Seems they got a descent welcoming. Keep it roiling. Now that would be something having Billy Sunday preaching nearby.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Thank you. But hold on.