The Entertainer
A juggler who brings in a crowd2 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
I love this especially as he "watches the world". What a great ending to a wonderful, well written poem. You have described the scene vividly and I feel as I'm a bystander. Well done.
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I love this especially as he "watches the world". What a great ending to a wonderful, well written poem. You have described the scene vividly and I feel as I'm a bystander. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from T.A. Walk
This is a cool piece because it's kind of like a momentary look at a fragment of a life.
I hope that made sense, I enjoyed it.
I would've liked to see a different layout, but that's a personal embellishment, not a real critique.
I think all poets do it a little differently!!
We'll done, thank you for sharing!
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This is a cool piece because it's kind of like a momentary look at a fragment of a life.
I hope that made sense, I enjoyed it.
I would've liked to see a different layout, but that's a personal embellishment, not a real critique.
I think all poets do it a little differently!!
We'll done, thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
