Riches I Have Not
Wisdom from a neighbour3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I appreciate your time and entry to a confusing contest for the originator meant not to look for a rebuttal but a final frontier story of others. I like your submission and for the first time EVER like the BOLD print used.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
I appreciate your time and entry to a confusing contest for the originator meant not to look for a rebuttal but a final frontier story of others. I like your submission and for the first time EVER like the BOLD print used.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thanks, Tom. I have had a couple of pointers about the work not being seen, ie easy to read. I did not make a big issue of it as there are so many sight problems these days. Can I ask you what youthink is best?
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That was pretty cool how opinions can vary and here say can create more opinions. There are frugals people there are cheap people. There are generous people all across walks of life and we are what we are. You have created a fine piece of magic here. I enjoyed reading it very much. It written and obviously by a talented hand. I see no issues with grammar esthetics sentence structor subject matter. You've got a great little piece of magic here. Best of luck to you and have an awesome day!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
That was pretty cool how opinions can vary and here say can create more opinions. There are frugals people there are cheap people. There are generous people all across walks of life and we are what we are. You have created a fine piece of magic here. I enjoyed reading it very much. It written and obviously by a talented hand. I see no issues with grammar esthetics sentence structor subject matter. You've got a great little piece of magic here. Best of luck to you and have an awesome day!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Many thanks, Lea Your review and encouragement is most welcome.
Comment from Jaye McNevin
If the author's mission was to set out to confuse the reviewer, then mission accomplished. This reads like a choice bit of satire or some sort of random wanderings through a re-telling of Alice in Wonderland, only making less sense than that venerable tome. But I have to say the image is definitely provocative. Altogether interesting to say the least.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
If the author's mission was to set out to confuse the reviewer, then mission accomplished. This reads like a choice bit of satire or some sort of random wanderings through a re-telling of Alice in Wonderland, only making less sense than that venerable tome. But I have to say the image is definitely provocative. Altogether interesting to say the least.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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No, that was not the intention. It was meant to amuse!