Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
this is what the purity of true love is... the surrender of one's self. A notion to sacrifice all in ones power for that all encompassing love.

My favorite line is your last one... what a stunning conclusion...
For your love?
I would give you my love.

Great emphasis on the refrain of...'For your-

Beautifully crafted, composed and presented!

With our thoughts we create...
no boundaries.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Thank you for going through my old poems.... I really appreciate. I always love to hear your insights and feedback.

Eyes muy buen amigo.

Con Cariņo

Marival
"There is no passion to be found playing small--in settling for a life that is less than the one you are capable of living." ...

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....except I would have phrased it, "For your touch I would pay one hundred-to one hundred fifty bucks, depending on how good the touch is!"

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

LoL

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

For true love we would do almost anything. I read an interesting fact the other day. 'True love is when you fall in love with someone's soul before you touch their skin. I have thought about that, and it's so true. Maybe if more people followed that, there would be so many divorces or broken hearts. Thank you for sharing another perfect package.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

These words are the words of someone who is completely devoted and in love with the addressee and it seems she has already given her love whether he has or not.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, big sister ❤️

Marival

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very clever use of repetition and parallelism here. The lovers expressing the physical touch to the gifts of the universe.

I especially enjoyed the final two lines. Love for love.

Great job here. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

A beautiful sentiment. I love the offerings of the stars and the moon. And yet it is an even exchange. A heart for a heart. Very romantic. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Gretchen

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aww "what i do for you" is a sweet declaration of love
with nice imagery of the sun, moon and stars
i can see someone saying this as vows...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Shelley

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Alexan

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Alexan

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice poem that you presented us today about what we would do for those that we love. I suppose all of us have different things that we would do for somebody. I enjoyed listening to your phone very much. Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Patricia

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs