When My Time Has Run Out
My own checklist of questions65 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Debi, first I want to say...CONGRATULATIONS
on a well earned win my wonderful friend...
I can honestly say Debi...I can relate to pretty much
every question on here...and come back and answer
myself...did I do all the right things???...and even with all my sins...
does God/Jesus see me worthy enough to let me come home?...
has my legacy of my love for God/Jesus stood stronger
enough to be truly forgiven...I guess I'll know on judgement day...
sigh...
I love your poem beautiful you...and your picture is stunning...
very well written...much love to you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Hi Debi, first I want to say...CONGRATULATIONS
on a well earned win my wonderful friend...
I can honestly say Debi...I can relate to pretty much
every question on here...and come back and answer
myself...did I do all the right things???...and even with all my sins...
does God/Jesus see me worthy enough to let me come home?...
has my legacy of my love for God/Jesus stood stronger
enough to be truly forgiven...I guess I'll know on judgement day...
sigh...
I love your poem beautiful you...and your picture is stunning...
very well written...much love to you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Oh Linda, you are always so dear and lovely, and I can't thank you enough for the kind and thoughtful comments for my poem. Thank you too for the gracious six stars. I am truly honored. Thank you again, my beautiful and sweet friend. With much love, Debi
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you earn every star give beautiful
you...and your so welcome...love you
much...xxoo
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debi,
I come only with myself, with all the tools that have been laid at my feet... all the lessons in forgiveness and judgement that have come to me through so many different avenues in my life and over every bump in the road. The more the act is practised through the truth of our faith, the easier the passage to pass through.
I love you are questioning yourself, your actions, the reasoning behind them... your strength of faith, if indeed you have done enough, or will be enough by the time of your departure from this physical plane.
But we both know life is not easy, it's not supposed to be. It is about constantly questioning, recalibrating one's values and direction... that is our saviour, to be the best version of ourselves everyday, regardless.
There will always be times that will test us, to see how we will reacted to any given circumstance or situation. I have witnessed you rise above life-altering setbacks whilst keeping that enigmatic smile upon your face.
So, yes dear Debi, there are lessons to be learned at every turn... some plain to see or hear, others masked within a reactive response... the challenge is to always be yourself, to keep rising above the distractions that take away one's focus to our higher purpose.
But to the answer the question of 'will your name' be engraved... the engraving has already been worked, for you, for all of us... that was Jesus's gift of sacrifice for every soul.
This is an outstanding piece of rhyming poetry Debi and so deserved its first placing in the 'Question' contest... you more than hit it out of the park, you laid breadcrumbs for those to follow your lead.
Absolutely Stunning!
With our thoughts we create...
reasonable-questionable doubt.
Warm regards,
James.
******Star exceptional!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Hi Debi,
I come only with myself, with all the tools that have been laid at my feet... all the lessons in forgiveness and judgement that have come to me through so many different avenues in my life and over every bump in the road. The more the act is practised through the truth of our faith, the easier the passage to pass through.
I love you are questioning yourself, your actions, the reasoning behind them... your strength of faith, if indeed you have done enough, or will be enough by the time of your departure from this physical plane.
But we both know life is not easy, it's not supposed to be. It is about constantly questioning, recalibrating one's values and direction... that is our saviour, to be the best version of ourselves everyday, regardless.
There will always be times that will test us, to see how we will reacted to any given circumstance or situation. I have witnessed you rise above life-altering setbacks whilst keeping that enigmatic smile upon your face.
So, yes dear Debi, there are lessons to be learned at every turn... some plain to see or hear, others masked within a reactive response... the challenge is to always be yourself, to keep rising above the distractions that take away one's focus to our higher purpose.
But to the answer the question of 'will your name' be engraved... the engraving has already been worked, for you, for all of us... that was Jesus's gift of sacrifice for every soul.
This is an outstanding piece of rhyming poetry Debi and so deserved its first placing in the 'Question' contest... you more than hit it out of the park, you laid breadcrumbs for those to follow your lead.
Absolutely Stunning!
With our thoughts we create...
reasonable-questionable doubt.
Warm regards,
James.
******Star exceptional!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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James, I was serious when I said I didn't expect a review. But for the kind response, I can honestly say now I am glad you did. I love that you responded on my question about knowing if my name is engraved.. I went thru childhood thinking that if I sinned, then I would go to hell if I died before repenting. So that is on my mind at times and don't know why I still feel the need to prove myself when someone makes accusations at me. But it's friends like you, help me to know that I no longer have to prove anything to anyone, as God sees who I am. And I guess by asking you to read this, I was showing who I was. Yet, you already knew that. Thanks for all the kind words for me, and little by little I am shaking off that molestation children's syndrome. Every time I think I have it licked, the mean girls type show up again.
The good news is I have some good friends like you that truly have been a blessing. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for showing up so many times when I needed a good friend. I do happen to know that God sends us where he wants us, and thankfully He sent you to FS, as you are a good friend to so many. Thanks again, my awesome friend!!
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So true... there is only one person you should ever feel responsible to prove something to... and that's you!
You've got this Debi, once you really grasp your self-worth, show as much kindness to yourself as you gift others, know what every good friend knows... how damn special you truly are, then freedom is yours. I also thank you, you have shown me an inspiration and a zest for life through your determination... through your smile... remember, nothing can harm you more than your thoughts left unguarded.
In my thoughts and prayers dear friend!
Comment from Chuck Keller
I'm not much for religion but this one has such a positive message I had to comment.
I always appreciate positive messages in any form.
You've done a wonderful job of demonstrating the right path for everyone.
I hope others heed your advice and try to be the person we all should be
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I'm not much for religion but this one has such a positive message I had to comment.
I always appreciate positive messages in any form.
You've done a wonderful job of demonstrating the right path for everyone.
I hope others heed your advice and try to be the person we all should be
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Chuck, I thank you so very much for the awesome review and the kind comments. It means more to me that you took the time to read it, knowing you weren't into religion. And then still gave such a kind review, I appreciate more than I can possibly say, my friend.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Debi, this poem asking questions is brilliantly written, and so full of faith. You ask all of the important questions any believer should ask. Each and every one, striking a chord from deep inside where our moral compasses lie.
For you, Dear Lady, I would answer yes for you. You are a beautiful and thoughtful person. You rightfully deserved the first place win!!!
Much love,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Debi, this poem asking questions is brilliantly written, and so full of faith. You ask all of the important questions any believer should ask. Each and every one, striking a chord from deep inside where our moral compasses lie.
For you, Dear Lady, I would answer yes for you. You are a beautiful and thoughtful person. You rightfully deserved the first place win!!!
Much love,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Oh Rhonda, you are always so dear and lovely, and I can't thank you enough for the kind and thoughtful comments for my poem. Thank you again, my beautiful and sweet friend. With much love, Debi
Comment from jenintorre
Congratulations Debbie on winning the question competition. You really have done some soul searching here. Your win is so well deserved. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Congratulations Debbie on winning the question competition. You really have done some soul searching here. Your win is so well deserved. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Jen, you are always so sweet and lovely, and I can't thank you enough for the kind and thoughtful comments for my poem. I appreciate it so much, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful poem. It's so touching for you to write these comforting words that are so meaningful to read. When our time has ran out, will it be heaven or hell? In my heart, I know I want the man above. I think you have displayed your feelings in this poem very well.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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What a wonderful poem. It's so touching for you to write these comforting words that are so meaningful to read. When our time has ran out, will it be heaven or hell? In my heart, I know I want the man above. I think you have displayed your feelings in this poem very well.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Rosemary, you are as lovely as I remember, and I can't thank you enough for the kind and thoughtful comments for my poem. Thank you too for the gracious six stars. I am truly honored. Thank you again, my sweet friend.
Comment from Jim Wile
This was terrific, Debi, and I'm sorry I have no 6s left for it, or I'd surely give it one. These were all good questions, and you can tell a lot about a person from the questions they choose to ask. These are wonderful questions which are mostly rhetorical for you since the answers are obvious, knowing you.
I certainly know where you'll be when your time runs out: in the hands of God and in the hearts of everyone who knows you, including all of us on FanStory. But let's not have that happen for a while yet. Love, Jim
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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This was terrific, Debi, and I'm sorry I have no 6s left for it, or I'd surely give it one. These were all good questions, and you can tell a lot about a person from the questions they choose to ask. These are wonderful questions which are mostly rhetorical for you since the answers are obvious, knowing you.
I certainly know where you'll be when your time runs out: in the hands of God and in the hearts of everyone who knows you, including all of us on FanStory. But let's not have that happen for a while yet. Love, Jim
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Hi Jim, I cannot thank you enough for such lovely comments for this poem. Especially from you being such an expert, it really means a lot to me. And yes, this is my checklist. I wasn't preaching to anyone else but it is because I am human and fall short that I know I need these things. But it is when I think I have it all under control is when I know I am in trouble and need another checkup. Thanks so much for your kindness.
Love, Debi
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
All we can do is strive to be the best we can be and let the rest go as it does. I'm sure we all fall into the trap of gossiping and doing the wrong thing from time to time but that's what makes us imperfect. I think our intentions will also come into play. Sometimes we don't intend for things to happen but they do.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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All we can do is strive to be the best we can be and let the rest go as it does. I'm sure we all fall into the trap of gossiping and doing the wrong thing from time to time but that's what makes us imperfect. I think our intentions will also come into play. Sometimes we don't intend for things to happen but they do.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Yes, you are so right and to be clear, I made sure of putting this in the description box next to title that this is my checklist. I wasn't preaching to anyone else. Yes, it is because I am human and fall short that I know I need these things. But it is when I think I have it all under control is when I know I am in trouble and need another checkup. Thanks so much for your kindness.
Love, Debi
Comment from JSD
The structure of this is excellent. It winds into the mind with its many questions and is extremely thought-provoking. I don't know why I missed it when it first came out, but clearly a worthy winner. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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The structure of this is excellent. It winds into the mind with its many questions and is extremely thought-provoking. I don't know why I missed it when it first came out, but clearly a worthy winner. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I sure appreciate your very kind comments for my questions poem, John. Thank you so very much.
Comment from Aussie
Nah, your time will never run out. Your poem Q&A was well written. I like to think others like you question 'Have I done enough?" In my book, it is never enough, comes a time we have to let go and let God. You will never let go. Still be writing when they screw the lid on! Bless you, my bee in a bottle. K xx
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Nah, your time will never run out. Your poem Q&A was well written. I like to think others like you question 'Have I done enough?" In my book, it is never enough, comes a time we have to let go and let God. You will never let go. Still be writing when they screw the lid on! Bless you, my bee in a bottle. K xx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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My dear Special K, I have never wanted you to be more right. Lol... Thanks so much for this one, the fun 🤩 , the crazy 😜, the Sweet and the six stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. I appreciate and love you to death. Oops, did I say that?