Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Exceptional

Geez Louise! Was not expecting that. In do twists myself, but that was something else. Amazing. Wonderfully full of promise. I am impressed. Have a good week. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was really interesting, we learnt so much more about Theo, he's such a nice man/guardian ... god. I'm looking forward to seeing what his village and his people are like. I wonder if they can make Echo an immortal? I love how you are bringing in our mythical charaters and making them real life characters. This was such a good chapter, Rhonda, and I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Hi Sandra. Thanks for reading this chapter. Echo?s immortality will be a huge issue throughout the remainder of the book. There are specific rules for it. Next chapter will reveal more. That is, once I finally get it written, lol.

Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

Another great chapter, Rhonda. We learn a lot of things in this one. Echo demonstrates her remarkable knack for getting at the truth. It is almost like Theo is under her spell, and he responds to her questions even though he'll say "I'd rather wait."

They make a good team and care for each other, as well as Sunny. She sounds like a beautiful cat. I like the description of Theo's sister who also likes animals, as well as cats. I also like the moment when she realizes she used the word "lifetime." The interview, questions, answers and thoughts continue, but Theo seems okay with it. A very good ending. Well done, my friend.

Interesting detail about Hades being in the picture and also the smells that Echo noticed when she was leaving her place.






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 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Hi Pam, thank you so much for the six stars and for a very detailed review.
Definitely, Echo knows how to get information out of Theo. She?s a reporter, but she?s also a woman, lol.

Thanks for picking up on the cat and sister. The sister is going to pop back up soon.

Thea?s also willing to talk a bit as he knows she will find out soon, but does warn her it?s not the best time. He?s an older brother and lets her make some choices.

I?m glad you like the cat. I had a neighbor who raised Russian Blues. They are gorgeous cats Mitch bright green eyes and a very soft meow. They are highly intelligent, which is one reason I chose the breed for the book.

I use scents a lot in this book for some reason, but it will tie in again later, too.

Again, thanks for your continual support.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

I wish I had another six for you. You ramped up the intensity and interest level by involving the Greek Pantheon. The brothers, Hades and Poisedon have long been at odds in mythology. I can't wait to see what you do with this. Super!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Yay, you made it to the last chapter! I?ve tried to take a modern day approach to an old feud, and it?ll only get more intense. Thank you, thank you for your reviews,
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery and dialogue that is creative, and will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the review, Alexandra. I'm glad the imagery and dialogue worked out the way I'd planned.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Sarah Robin

Excellent

I appreciated this chapter. It gave me some answers, but I still want more! Your characters are very well drawn and are very interesting. The writing is smooth and informative. Well done! Sarah

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the review and comments, Sarah! Theo let some of his information out, but left Echo with more she wanted. Lol, his nature might just have to change with her in his life.

Take care,
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda....and I sense a showdown coming with Hades. He looms over Echo and Theo like the tent of the damned, or something a little more realistic that looms!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Mike, you are so very perceptive, my friend! But, lots of stuff happens in between, lol!
But, is evil ever really defeated?

Thanks so much,
Rhonda

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is another excellent and faultlessly written chapter in which you blend mythology with religion and reality. Your focus on the cat in the beginning cleverly sets the scene and prepares us for Theo's disclosing of the other worldly weight and wonder of his family background. A magical read! Thank you so much, Rhonda. Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Hi Debbie, thanks so much for your lovely review, my friend!!
You've pretty much caught onto my blend, lol.

I'm glad you liked the cat element. He will have roles to play later. Gotta have animals!!

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

Oh-oh. Cracking open nuts like a curious journalist could get Echo into a lot of trouble if we keep going down the path of Greek mythology. I hope she knows about Pandora's box!
What I really enjoy about your writing is how skillfully you avoid verbs that filter the experience. You avoid saying Echo felt curious but instead say "the reporter inside Echo reared its head and drove her inquisitive nature" Great job with this chapter revealing more of the mystery!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Hi Helen, thank you for the six shining stars, my dear friend! You?re right on Echo?s curiosity and persistence. It will help her and get her into trouble. Nice reference to Pandora?s box. Mind if I use it later?

Thank you for the feedback on the verbs. It?s something I?m working on. Feel free to point out areas I miss.

Much love,
Rhonda

reply by lyenochka on 13-Nov-2023

I don't own the rights to Greek myths! 😂 You can use whatever you like! 💖

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Lol, I get it. I've taken great liberties with Greek Mythology, that's for sure.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This chapter has a lot of information about who Theo is and some info about his people. Echo doesn't seem to have any trouble believing him although his story connects to the ancient gods of early peoples.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Hi Carol, your right on her not seeming more surprised at his disclosures. I need to fix that part. I made her just a little to accepting.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda