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Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "The Fury PT2"Biography/Supernatural
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I really wish that your aim had been a little better with the plate, or that you had come out of the chute feet first into his groin, that would have been satisfying. However, we can't change history, no matter how hard we'd like to. I still think that you can pursue charges against him or your mom or both for years of abuse. There must be physical scars that will back you up. Surely your grandmother is gone by now, so she can't have any kind of influence on the social justice system. It's wonderful to forgive, but that doesn't mean that all is forgotten. Justice still needs to be meted out. Thanks for sharing gal.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
I really wish that your aim had been a little better with the plate, or that you had come out of the chute feet first into his groin, that would have been satisfying. However, we can't change history, no matter how hard we'd like to. I still think that you can pursue charges against him or your mom or both for years of abuse. There must be physical scars that will back you up. Surely your grandmother is gone by now, so she can't have any kind of influence on the social justice system. It's wonderful to forgive, but that doesn't mean that all is forgotten. Justice still needs to be meted out. Thanks for sharing gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Yes, there will be some legal repercussions very soon. Actually, I have come to the notice of social services. Because i've recently requested about twelve boxes of evidence. And yes, I can still charge and I can Sue as well. My main goal would be to put this out there and that there. It does affect change somewhere hopefully for all kids in the world. And the parents who don't seem to get it. Thank you my friend and I wish I got him in the clackers too Or in the head with that plate!
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In the clackers?! That's funny gal! I'm still laughing about that.
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Lol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This abuse is so vivid, cruel, and frequent, that it's a wonder you were not killed. Your unbelievable strength and tolerance for pain allowed you to hang on a little longer, knowing you might experience more of the same. Your stepfather probably enjoyed you trying to take a stand. It gave him something to laugh about and a reason to harm you further. I will be glad when this part of the story is over. It's difficult to read.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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This abuse is so vivid, cruel, and frequent, that it's a wonder you were not killed. Your unbelievable strength and tolerance for pain allowed you to hang on a little longer, knowing you might experience more of the same. Your stepfather probably enjoyed you trying to take a stand. It gave him something to laugh about and a reason to harm you further. I will be glad when this part of the story is over. It's difficult to read.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Oh yes, he was very amused by messing with us. I used to like to make tasks more difficult. So he could find a reason to punish. He was not to I wouldn't consider him a saying person. My mother's definitely got some illness going on for sure. I understand all of it now where it's come from, how generational it is. I won't let it pass beyond me. And I hope other family members do the same. Thank you for your very kind review for your wonderful comments and your empathy. Most of all thanks so much have a great night!
Comment from w.j.debi
I keep hoping you will get out of there very soon. How much can a person take before the body gives in? It is too bad that you had no one to go to for assistance and a way out. Again, I appreciate the courage it takes to write this.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I keep hoping you will get out of there very soon. How much can a person take before the body gives in? It is too bad that you had no one to go to for assistance and a way out. Again, I appreciate the courage it takes to write this.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you thank you so much! A fine compliment. Especially appreciate you reading long and hanging in there with me. Some of it is difficult to I doubly appreciate it!
Comment from Chuck Keller
Heartbreaking again, Kiddo.
I applaud the courage it takes to confront these evil memories.
Been there, done that.
YOU are always appreciated and helpful to many im sure.
Thank YOU for continuing to share this horror.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Heartbreaking again, Kiddo.
I applaud the courage it takes to confront these evil memories.
Been there, done that.
YOU are always appreciated and helpful to many im sure.
Thank YOU for continuing to share this horror.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi Chuck its so nice to know that you understand. You and others have reinforced what I have done was the way it need to be done. What had to be done and I cannot go with the guilt of my actions. I did what I had to do. So with yourself and others that are like-minded. I cannot let this all go and be done. Unless social services and authorities do what they're going to do. I do appreciate you very much.
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I'm always happy to see your name on a post or review.
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Comment from Jim Wile
Oh my God, this is so awful, Lea. It's just hard to imagine the cruel inhumanity of your very sick parents. How they could do this to a defenseless child just boggles the mind.
Your introductory words and your description of what happened skillfully built the horror of the situation. I can almost feel the blows you took. Yes, it is definitely time to get out again. I hope you are successful this time. - Jim
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Oh my God, this is so awful, Lea. It's just hard to imagine the cruel inhumanity of your very sick parents. How they could do this to a defenseless child just boggles the mind.
Your introductory words and your description of what happened skillfully built the horror of the situation. I can almost feel the blows you took. Yes, it is definitely time to get out again. I hope you are successful this time. - Jim
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Success does come, but at a price. Everything in this world is given take always the balance. Get my thank you again It's great to see you here I do understand the difficulty of reading some of the stuff so I am doubly appreciative Thank you jim have a great and awesome day!
Comment from BethShelby
I certainly don't blame you even though you knew he could inflict enough damage to actually kill you. There comes a time when a strong person has had all they intend to take. Probably at that moment you were thinking, "Go ahead and kill me and suffer the consequencies for what you have down. I'm through taking it." It is that or be cowed for life unable to acknowledge you were anything other than a slave. Many people have died at times like this. I admire your courage.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I certainly don't blame you even though you knew he could inflict enough damage to actually kill you. There comes a time when a strong person has had all they intend to take. Probably at that moment you were thinking, "Go ahead and kill me and suffer the consequencies for what you have down. I'm through taking it." It is that or be cowed for life unable to acknowledge you were anything other than a slave. Many people have died at times like this. I admire your courage.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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You're exactly right Beth. Almost like you were there with me. You are unique perspective is interesting and offers a different way of thinking. Oh, thank you for that me. I appreciate you so very much, but I've said it before. I'll keep on saying it have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I held my breath during the whole of your account here! And quite honestly, I don't think I've ever read anything that moved me more. Your poem at the beginning is brilliant and a scene-setter like no other! As is your introduction. The fear that's engendered here is utterly palpable and your own extreme vulnerability against this beast of a man evokes huge anger. There are some small edits (understandable in the process): In your intro - hat(r)ed and pain; "get out of my (sight)"; "(I)'m out the door"; "My sister(')s flip-flops"; "What the hell i(s) going on"; "Let go (o)f me"; "now look (you're) going to have to wash them"; "mind (o)f its own"; "knocked the wind (out) of me." This is a virtual six from me, Lea! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I think I held my breath during the whole of your account here! And quite honestly, I don't think I've ever read anything that moved me more. Your poem at the beginning is brilliant and a scene-setter like no other! As is your introduction. The fear that's engendered here is utterly palpable and your own extreme vulnerability against this beast of a man evokes huge anger. There are some small edits (understandable in the process): In your intro - hat(r)ed and pain; "get out of my (sight)"; "(I)'m out the door"; "My sister(')s flip-flops"; "What the hell i(s) going on"; "Let go (o)f me"; "now look (you're) going to have to wash them"; "mind (o)f its own"; "knocked the wind (out) of me." This is a virtual six from me, Lea! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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My edit program seems to have issues! Doesn't seem to want to function properly. Although admittedly, I do need to learn how to edit my own work, which perhaps requires a little more education for someone to edit which I believe our mutual friend has an idea in my area. Thank you so much, Debbie. You have no idea how humble and appreciative. I am of all your comments. For reading along too on a very hard sometimes gruesome accounting. Thank you again, my friend!
Comment from JSD
I've got no more sixes. This is so dramatic, although you've written this at pace and you need to check for typos. Still praying for you, Lea. Longing for escape. The mix of styles here is brilliant and so well handled.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I've got no more sixes. This is so dramatic, although you've written this at pace and you need to check for typos. Still praying for you, Lea. Longing for escape. The mix of styles here is brilliant and so well handled.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you, John. Yes, I definitely need to do some editing. Also, my online editor thinks be misbehaving. But I'm thankful that you appreciate these. I really am thank you for your comments. And yes, everything you say matters to me. Thank you, my friend always appreciate you!
Comment from L. Kalere
I had intended to start at the beginning, but can't help but read each part as they come out. Your pain and anguish are laid out naked in your writings. Difficult to write, difficult to read, difficult to imagine. What inner strength you've developed...incredible.
Please take care,
Linda
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I had intended to start at the beginning, but can't help but read each part as they come out. Your pain and anguish are laid out naked in your writings. Difficult to write, difficult to read, difficult to imagine. What inner strength you've developed...incredible.
Please take care,
Linda
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Linda you're so kind to say these great things! Thank you For reading and offering your thoughts and for providing such a fine review. Thank you for your compliments as well. I really appreciate them and I hope that you have the best day thanks again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Lea, when you poke the bear you must expect him to roar! You have some courage to stand up to this man as he has the will to harm and maim you as he has no boundaries. This is how children are killed by their parents. You are lucky to be alive Lea. You are feisty and strong willed Lea, and to comply would have made you weak. You sound a lot like my sister who fought back and suffered for it. Your Stepfather is not brave, he is a coward as he picks on children and his fight is with minors, he is not a man, he is a mouse! I have no idea what your Mother saw in him Lea? Did he beat her? This is another fine chapter and I can see things coming to a head here and it is a wonder you don't have lasting injuries from this awful assault. This story of yours gives me the chills, such awful child abuse from both your parents and they were never punished for it!
Just one edit for this line:
(What) the hell is wrong with you?)
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Oh my goodness Lea, when you poke the bear you must expect him to roar! You have some courage to stand up to this man as he has the will to harm and maim you as he has no boundaries. This is how children are killed by their parents. You are lucky to be alive Lea. You are feisty and strong willed Lea, and to comply would have made you weak. You sound a lot like my sister who fought back and suffered for it. Your Stepfather is not brave, he is a coward as he picks on children and his fight is with minors, he is not a man, he is a mouse! I have no idea what your Mother saw in him Lea? Did he beat her? This is another fine chapter and I can see things coming to a head here and it is a wonder you don't have lasting injuries from this awful assault. This story of yours gives me the chills, such awful child abuse from both your parents and they were never punished for it!
Just one edit for this line:
(What) the hell is wrong with you?)
Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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My mother was happy as a clam to be with him. He let her do what she wanted when she wanted and he paid the bills! What could be better for her? She had very little regard for her own children. She was at best a distracted parent. She didn't involve herself with us very much at all. We just some small humans that had to stay until eighteen so we were used as slaves and punching bags. Thank you Dolly again for sharing with me. Appreciate it very much. Understanding and recognition can be a great thing. But the way to get there not so great. Once again, I am saddened that you and your sister had to live through that.
But I see you are a strong and capable woman. I'm very much like my Mr. In that sense.
Thank you again my friend I hope your day is amazing!