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Getting Nowhere

I am going in circles.

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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You just did. lol This is excellent work. You use expressive and hyperbolic words that will draw in a readers to enjoy this as I have.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Really? Me? Thank you.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I tried to move the large rocks once, but couldn't because they were all in my head. Even on a bad day of writing, I'd rather write than not write! You have my permission to write anything, if that's what you love!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    I just reread the poem. I think your interpretation is a valid one, but what I had in mind was different. I was thinking of doing something else that I love and then coming back to writing when I am fresh and not stuck anymore. Are both interpretations valid?
reply by jim vecchio on 09-Nov-2023
    You are the Master of your desires and needs. I choose to believe there is a God in control of all, but He allows us to make free-will decisions. You should do what your heart of hearts tells you to do. But, if you lay off writing for awhile I, and I'm sure many others, will feel a loss at not being able to enjoy your writing.