Oh, Deer!
Where Can Mr. Antlers Be?3 total reviews
Comment from Claire Tennant
I thouroughly enjoyed this tale, If I had seen it earlier you would have had my vote. Sadly illness took over, but the good news is
no one else got the vote either. God Bless
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I thouroughly enjoyed this tale, If I had seen it earlier you would have had my vote. Sadly illness took over, but the good news is
no one else got the vote either. God Bless
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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You have my vote for being an excellent writer!
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Thank you so much
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Thank you for your wonderful words.
Comment from Elaine Westheimer
Funny poem, especially the last stanza' play on the San Francisco song. Hope you don't mind if I offer a few rhythm suggestions:
...at the theatre's double feature
Is a swampy muck where I lost my buck?
...at parties he goes stag
...suddenly, did he go poof?
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Funny poem, especially the last stanza' play on the San Francisco song. Hope you don't mind if I offer a few rhythm suggestions:
...at the theatre's double feature
Is a swampy muck where I lost my buck?
...at parties he goes stag
...suddenly, did he go poof?
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Comment from Navada
Ha! This is terrific! The inventiveness and comedy of the various types of lost deer made me laugh out loud and the final couplet brings it home with the best pun of them all! Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.
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Ha! This is terrific! The inventiveness and comedy of the various types of lost deer made me laugh out loud and the final couplet brings it home with the best pun of them all! Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023