Death's Trick
Remembering12 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
This is such a very sad poem!! You have described the pain and anguish you have felt about the death of "a bard" very descriptively. Thanks for sharing your very sad poem.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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This is such a very sad poem!! You have described the pain and anguish you have felt about the death of "a bard" very descriptively. Thanks for sharing your very sad poem.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from leather
You used an excellent image for your illustration. The poem flowed well and gave a visual reference...such as the color of the eyes. I do wish the text were larger. I want that more with each passing year, and at some point, I will skip over small texted entries in favor of larger ones.
Thanks for writing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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You used an excellent image for your illustration. The poem flowed well and gave a visual reference...such as the color of the eyes. I do wish the text were larger. I want that more with each passing year, and at some point, I will skip over small texted entries in favor of larger ones.
Thanks for writing.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I will try to increase the text size in the future, thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the
Rhyming Poetry Contest.
Excellent word imagery and presentation.
Love it... "Your eyes, pure blue, would hold that hint
of impishness, a feisty hue." Great description.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Wonderful entry for the
Rhyming Poetry Contest.
Excellent word imagery and presentation.
Love it... "Your eyes, pure blue, would hold that hint
of impishness, a feisty hue." Great description.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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thank you for taking the time to read and review
Comment from Daylily
I am sure your old friend would have loved to know your memories are still strong and that you have written this beautiful poem as a tribute. Losing someone we care about is always a difficult situation to undergo. Best wishes in the rhyming contest!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I am sure your old friend would have loved to know your memories are still strong and that you have written this beautiful poem as a tribute. Losing someone we care about is always a difficult situation to undergo. Best wishes in the rhyming contest!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine rhyming words with perfect metre, a joy to read and this sounds like a very personal poem full of memories, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Fine rhyming words with perfect metre, a joy to read and this sounds like a very personal poem full of memories, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, yes, very personal.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautiful poem that you have written about your old friend. I enjoyed Listening to it and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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This is a beautiful poem that you have written about your old friend. I enjoyed Listening to it and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Its so hard when good friends pass. It leaves a friend-shaped hole in your heart that only memories can fill. But the memories are not solid like cement, they're fluid like bubble tea always waiting to be churned up.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Its so hard when good friends pass. It leaves a friend-shaped hole in your heart that only memories can fill. But the memories are not solid like cement, they're fluid like bubble tea always waiting to be churned up.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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That's so very true, thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from JSD
A great entry for the contest. Your rhyme and rhythm are assured and unforced and the message of this poem is sweet and heartfelt. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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A great entry for the contest. Your rhyme and rhythm are assured and unforced and the message of this poem is sweet and heartfelt. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely poignant rhyming poem that takes you down memory street to ther days. I loved the 'hint of impishness' in blue eyes, reminded me of twinkling in hazel eyes. Beautifully written and I wish you luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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A lovely poignant rhyming poem that takes you down memory street to ther days. I loved the 'hint of impishness' in blue eyes, reminded me of twinkling in hazel eyes. Beautifully written and I wish you luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from pome lover
good rhymes that got your feelings across; however, when I got to your authors note, I was surprised at "old friend." It seemed much more than that in the poem, at least to me. At any rate it's sad, and a good entry for the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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good rhymes that got your feelings across; however, when I got to your authors note, I was surprised at "old friend." It seemed much more than that in the poem, at least to me. At any rate it's sad, and a good entry for the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Could have been more, maybe, but time never really allowed that. He was a dear friend and still missed, been 13 years
