Comment from Aiona

Excellent

I love this cute nonet, because it's as cute as its subject matter. It fulfills the syllabic structure of the nonet prompt, and it is indeed about an animal. I love the descriptive words used, even without the accompanying picture, I was able to visualize it. I also appreciate the clever use of alliteration in the first two lines. Perhaps it could also be injected into the remaining lines.... except of course the last one... LOL!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Hi Aiona,thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Rabbit in the Woods, has the proper formatting and describes the typical bunny passing by on its way to wherever these lagomorphs go. ..................

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

We have a rabbit that rins through our backyard sometimes. It's so nice to be able to enjoy nature where you live. This is excellent work for the challenge. You use descriptivist words and colorful imagery.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

HI Alex, thanks for your comments and review.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a very well written piece of poetry in nonet style in which you describe a rabbit and its actions very well. I found it to be vividly descriptive. Well done

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Hi Wendyanne, thanks for your comments and review.