Hearts Need Grease
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Comment from karenina
Yup. It's a six! Original, seven syllables of some fancy named meter that works... (smile)--
And a perfectly insane metaphor for an emotion we can't "run" without!
This tickled my fancy!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Yup. It's a six! Original, seven syllables of some fancy named meter that works... (smile)--
And a perfectly insane metaphor for an emotion we can't "run" without!
This tickled my fancy!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Wow! I?m flattered, thank you so much! I?m really glad you dig it. You made my day! Best wishes to you :)
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All the best to you as well!
I know some hearts that need Jiffy Lube!
;)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have. True idea.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have. True idea.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your kindness Alex, I really appreciate it!
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a cute maintenance poem for the heart. The danger of not having regular use of the heart is it does turn to stone. Very humorous piece of writing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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This was a cute maintenance poem for the heart. The danger of not having regular use of the heart is it does turn to stone. Very humorous piece of writing. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you Gretchen! I?m really glad you liked it! Best wishes to you :)
