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Words of Warning

Beware those you throw away

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Poetry is often filled with revengeful wishes. Don't we wish this would be true: "Deeds come back to haunt. I was responsible for one being confronted. Now I look back & realize we were just kids. Grace VanderWaal sings a song call Just Kids...my mind goes to this cousin. They won't let me post the you tube link, but you will enjoy her songs, especially Highway and others. I hope you take time to check her stuff out.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    I will check her out and thanks.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 09-Nov-2023
    Good, you hopefully will become a fan. She began writing her own stuff at 11 &is still at it at 19. She has a coupleof albums too if you want music in the background
Comment from jim vecchio
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Those first three stanzas could easily have been me. Thank God that "me" will never be found again! If this poem escribes you, then I'm glad that "you" won't be found again, either!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    I hope that no one like that would ever be seen again. Thank you for taking the time to review.
reply by jim vecchio on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to write!
Comment from Lisasview
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Hi there,
First read of yours since I was able to move you from my Fan list onto my Following list...so now I get your posts!!
Wow, now this one is super dark...
I have nothing new posted but would you mind checking to make sure I am on your following list?
Lisasview

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    You are on my fan list, and my follow list and I am happy about that.
    I've had a lot going on lately, and wrapping my head around it has been hard. I sat, moved, thought, wrote, and scratched out pieces of poems all day long then suddenly it just came. Processing for a writer is a beautiful and frustrating process. Look forward to hearing your thoughts on my future writing.
reply by Lisasview on 08-Nov-2023
    You are welcome and glad we are now for sure on each others lists.
    Lisa
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very interesting post for that. You know rules contest I enjoyed it very much and it is different than your presentation is nice. I hope that you have a wonderful day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you
Comment from Wendyanne
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Sadly I can relate to this after being abused by 3 different paedophiles from age 6 to 15. It has certainly changed me and affected my life. So many lies!!! What is 'agong'? Do you mean 'agog'? You have expressed your thoughts and feelings well

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you for pointing out the error. I am sorry you had to go through that in your life. I am sorry for all the other as well. It is a shame that it happens.
Comment from royowen
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Pedophilia is the worst and the sneakiest of all crimes, it attacks the true innocents of this world, and it's the most rank of crimes against, I consider it worse than murder, beautifully written Mia, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you.
reply by royowen on 08-Nov-2023
    Welcome
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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So deep and devastating. How many people are lost to violence every day? Every hour come to think of it. Some run away, some are cast aside, and some I shudder to even think about.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    There are far to many and it is very sad.