The Eleventh Month
The only November day in Melbourne!!2 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
I loved your poem because I identify with it completely. I am from Melbourne too and I absolutely enjoyed the holiday and the chance to stay in today. I am not a fan of racing anyway. I love the artwork, very creative. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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I loved your poem because I identify with it completely. I am from Melbourne too and I absolutely enjoyed the holiday and the chance to stay in today. I am not a fan of racing anyway. I love the artwork, very creative. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, today is Melbourne cup day and here I sit reviewing this timely 5-7-5 saying - hooray! I will not have lost money betting on horses ;-) Thanks for sharing.
Slight typo above your title - It is stinking hot but (the) show..
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Yes, today is Melbourne cup day and here I sit reviewing this timely 5-7-5 saying - hooray! I will not have lost money betting on horses ;-) Thanks for sharing.
Slight typo above your title - It is stinking hot but (the) show..
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for the timely reminder. I think I altered the description. I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Amendment reads better :-)