Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter Eight "A hidden past, a devastating truth.
7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I'd never make it as a detective...
(Smile)
Back to the drawing board...
(You must enjoy your readers opining!)
William ...
She's worried about how her secret will unravel her life!
He brings back the past...but hmm..
He may not be the villain at all...
It's not what he's done, it's what he knows!
Maybe?
I'm trying here!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I'd never make it as a detective...
(Smile)
Back to the drawing board...
(You must enjoy your readers opining!)
William ...
She's worried about how her secret will unravel her life!
He brings back the past...but hmm..
He may not be the villain at all...
It's not what he's done, it's what he knows!
Maybe?
I'm trying here!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The suspense you are creating keeps me wanting to turn the next page. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. The suspense you are creating keeps me wanting to turn the next page. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
She keeps making bad decisions. She hasn't spoken to her for over twenty years and she wants to unload this mess on her? Does her husband know all of it? It's like a soap opera where you are yelling at the screen. It's maddening, but I like it. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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She keeps making bad decisions. She hasn't spoken to her for over twenty years and she wants to unload this mess on her? Does her husband know all of it? It's like a soap opera where you are yelling at the screen. It's maddening, but I like it. Karen
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.
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I am. Have a good week. Karen
Comment from royowen
I think the very thing we fear the most about people of our past is that they know things about us and things that we've done, or even said, that they know about us, can be be terribly troubling, the beauty of being older is, we probably don't care, but some do. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I think the very thing we fear the most about people of our past is that they know things about us and things that we've done, or even said, that they know about us, can be be terribly troubling, the beauty of being older is, we probably don't care, but some do. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Weren't we(?) And
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you Roy, I?m pleased that you?re enjoying it.
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Welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our past sometimes catches up with us as it has in this case and I intrigued to know what has happened, perhaps Hayley will shed some light on the situation.
Another fine chapter in your story Jacob.
I have one suggestion for this line:
(If William comes for me now, has he gone for anyone else?)
A joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Our past sometimes catches up with us as it has in this case and I intrigued to know what has happened, perhaps Hayley will shed some light on the situation.
Another fine chapter in your story Jacob.
I have one suggestion for this line:
(If William comes for me now, has he gone for anyone else?)
A joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I?m pleased that you?re enjoying it.
Comment from BethShelby
East post tells me a little bit more. Whatever happened must have happened in London and she is wondering if Hayley will to her. She seems to be assuming that William is comming forr her. I'm hoping I will soon have all of the back story so I can know what happened.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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East post tells me a little bit more. Whatever happened must have happened in London and she is wondering if Hayley will to her. She seems to be assuming that William is comming forr her. I'm hoping I will soon have all of the back story so I can know what happened.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering if Hayley will contact her. I thought after the last post that William molested Angela, now I'm wondering if the girls did something to him. I can't wait to find out what the secret is. This is a good post.
we went on holiday together (a holiday or holidays)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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I'm wondering if Hayley will contact her. I thought after the last post that William molested Angela, now I'm wondering if the girls did something to him. I can't wait to find out what the secret is. This is a good post.
we went on holiday together (a holiday or holidays)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.