Retaliation
Is it worth it in the end?10 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I wonder how a poem can be written in one line but you've proven it can be with this very poetic yet deep example.
Congratulations on third place.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I wonder how a poem can be written in one line but you've proven it can be with this very poetic yet deep example.
Congratulations on third place.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and complimentary comments. I really appreciate it.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gramalot
This is a thought provoking one liner. It uses the artwork and alliteration well to describe the mental after effects of revenge.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Hi Gramalot
This is a thought provoking one liner. It uses the artwork and alliteration well to describe the mental after effects of revenge.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your well wishes and review. I appreciate it.
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You're welcome on both accounts, Joan
P S Would you want to give me your first name. You don't have to if you don't want to.
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Hi. Thanks, it?s Jerri.😍
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You're welcome, Jerri. Thanks for the first name,
Joan
Comment from karenina
Alliteratively masterful in one line! War is a zero-sum game. To not avenge the brutal deaths brought on by the terrorists is unthinkable. To seek out and waken or eradicate Hamas has so many civilian casualties.
Your author's note sums it up: "The tragedy amidst the travesties of war."
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Alliteratively masterful in one line! War is a zero-sum game. To not avenge the brutal deaths brought on by the terrorists is unthinkable. To seek out and waken or eradicate Hamas has so many civilian casualties.
Your author's note sums it up: "The tragedy amidst the travesties of war."
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words and great review. I appreciate it.
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Welcome!
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Comment from Navada
I enjoyed your powerful and reflective words, accompanied by a perfect visual image to capture the look of true despair. I also enjoyed your delicate use of alliteration to heighten the impact of your carefully-chosen words. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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I enjoyed your powerful and reflective words, accompanied by a perfect visual image to capture the look of true despair. I also enjoyed your delicate use of alliteration to heighten the impact of your carefully-chosen words. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your great review. I appreciate it!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow. What a powerful, emotional one line poem. You raise the much needed question with directness. This is an excellent piece. You used great alliteration.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Wow. What a powerful, emotional one line poem. You raise the much needed question with directness. This is an excellent piece. You used great alliteration.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Than you so much for the wonderful review and 6 stars. I appreciate it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The tit for tat in war is distressing and life threatening, and it is simply not worth the effort. These are poignant words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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The tit for tat in war is distressing and life threatening, and it is simply not worth the effort. These are poignant words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate it.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Gramalot8,
Your one-line poem is timely and vital. I especially like the alliteration of "rendering retaliation" and "despair of devastation".
I can understand Israel's mission to free the prisoners, and punish the Hamas terrorists. But the world is watching. They've seen the damage and chaos, the Palestinian deaths (over 10,000 now), and the long walk to safety for many refugees. No belongings! Some just carry a white flag of surrender. What will they do? Their homes have been destroyed. Belongings buried.
If Netanyahu stops the attack, Hamas has won. And the prisoners might be released, or not. They might already be dead. But if he doesn't stop, he is causing many people to hate Jews. Antisemitism is spreading around the world. It's a mess. Everyone blames the Jews. But they should be blaming the terrorists. It was their massacre of 1400 Israelis that started the whole thing. Cowards. Killers. They hide behind Palestinians. Who are they? Are they from Iran? Armageddon is creeping ever closer, I'm afraid.
Good Luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hi Gramalot8,
Your one-line poem is timely and vital. I especially like the alliteration of "rendering retaliation" and "despair of devastation".
I can understand Israel's mission to free the prisoners, and punish the Hamas terrorists. But the world is watching. They've seen the damage and chaos, the Palestinian deaths (over 10,000 now), and the long walk to safety for many refugees. No belongings! Some just carry a white flag of surrender. What will they do? Their homes have been destroyed. Belongings buried.
If Netanyahu stops the attack, Hamas has won. And the prisoners might be released, or not. They might already be dead. But if he doesn't stop, he is causing many people to hate Jews. Antisemitism is spreading around the world. It's a mess. Everyone blames the Jews. But they should be blaming the terrorists. It was their massacre of 1400 Israelis that started the whole thing. Cowards. Killers. They hide behind Palestinians. Who are they? Are they from Iran? Armageddon is creeping ever closer, I'm afraid.
Good Luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review and comments. It?s just so maddening sad! Absolutely no one is winning!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very deftly done. The picture was amazing. I use Pinterest mostly. But I can get lost there watching laughing baby pictures. If you ever need a pick me up
, watch babies. Works like a charm. Good work here.
Karen
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Very deftly done. The picture was amazing. I use Pinterest mostly. But I can get lost there watching laughing baby pictures. If you ever need a pick me up
, watch babies. Works like a charm. Good work here.
Karen
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
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U R Welcome :-) Karen
Comment from Wendyanne
What a powerful question written in just six well chosen words and alliteratively too. I think despare should be despair?? Very thought-provoking! Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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What a powerful question written in just six well chosen words and alliteratively too. I think despare should be despair?? Very thought-provoking! Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank so much for your review . I fix my typo.
Comment from zanya
A question that is so relevant in our war-filled times - war brings destruction and death and leaves gaping holes in people's ordinary lives and then what?
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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A question that is so relevant in our war-filled times - war brings destruction and death and leaves gaping holes in people's ordinary lives and then what?
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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So true! Thanks so much for your review.