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Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Debi,
I don't know Verna Cole Mitchell, but your introduction urges me to look her up. Terrific way you've put her in rhyme.
Steve and Ruth Smith live in the Blue Ridge Mountains of North Carolina. They have a log cabin now, but back in the late 70's formed the Zion Mountain Folk based in Hawaii. They still perform concerts with guitar, banjo and hammered dulcimer. I wonder if Verna has heard of them? They were a big part of my early Christian walk. I bought their album, "Grass Roots Music", and taught the songs to my Youth Choir at Grand Bay Baptist Church.
"She loves her family and Lord
Chocolate, hymns, walks with Leon
Her music, writing, never bored
Old movies, list goes on and on" ... except for Leon, she sounds a lot like me!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Awe, thanks for the awesome review and comments for Verna's poem. She is a remarkable woman and always so kind and caring. Yeah, I think many of us can relate when it comes to chocolate. Thanks for all of your other kind words and lovely review. You are such a special guy, Kimbob.
    Debi
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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Absolutely beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Very lovely words. Beautiful overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
    Joanne, Thank you so very much, sweetie! It is so good to see you.
    I appreciate your very sweet comments for Verna's poem. And also for the six stars. You are so special and sweet! Thanks again, my very dear friend!
reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 07-Nov-2023
    You?re so welcome my friend I am into crating right now getting ready for a craft fair. Don?t get to be here much . I miss it .
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Good luck sweetie but hurry back cause you are sure missed.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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Thanks for showcasing Verna's book, and sharing in your poem. I don't know Verna well, so it was interesting reading your poetic tribute. Interesting that she is a teacher. There are a lot of us on the site. I think the teacher in us does remain in some form. I can also identify with the love of chocolate!

Happy Birthday, Verna, and I will be at your "Partay." I'll bring the chocolates!!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
    Oh Pam, I just looked, thinking that I'd find your birthday in the next few months and I do not have it, and I am so sorry! I just assumed it had to be in one of the upcoming months of the list Helen gave me. How did we get this far into the year w/o me realizing? Please tell me I haven't missed it. And if I have, I will make it up to you, as you are so special to me and you know that. '
    Thanks for the kind words for Verna's poem and for her. She is a remarkable woman like you are.
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2023
    It's okay, Debi. You had already asked me. I am not comfortable reading about myself. I appreciate the thought. I know you care, but I am a private person. It took me a long time on FS before I even used my real name!! You are very welcome for the replies about Verna. You are remarkable for doing all of this.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    I do understand, Pam. I am a horrible receiver of gifts, whether it be a physical or virtual one, like all those birthday poems for my birthday. I get kinda weirded out and don't know how to act. Don't get me wrong, I do appreciate them so much, but I have a hard time accepting gifts. Yet I sure love giving them. I am one big kid at Christmas, so lol, I do understand. If you ever change your mind, please let me know. Writing these has taken away from my other writing but by far the most rewarding I have ever done because our posts are soon forgotten, but to know these are important to at least one is a great feeling.
    Thanks for sharing your feelings.
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2023
    You are very welcome, Debi, and thanks for sharing about the birthday poems. It is a great thing you are doing.
Comment from Wendyanne
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This a lovely tribute to Verna, a lady I know very little about as I am 'new' to the site recently after rejoining. Thank you for sharing this biographical piece of poetry with us.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
    Hello Wendyanne, my newest sweet friend, .. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from JSD
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Hey, Debi. Another good one here. I hope life for you has calmed down a bit and you are catching up with things! The rhyme, rhythm and content are excellent in this one. Well done. x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
    John, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Daylily
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This is a wonderful tribute written as a poetic biography celebrating Verna Cole Mitchell's birthday and recently published book of poetry. I also enjoyed the spiritual song postings provided for readers' delight. Thank you for sharing it all, Debi.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Lily, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Happy birthday Verna! I have enjoyed her work. And I am fortunate to have received some very nice reviews from her. Your poem added a lot of interesting detail about this fine lady. And your music selections were excellent. Debi, thank you for another great birthday poem. Terry.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Terry, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Such a wonderful way to give a birthday wish, and this poem speak for itself. This poem does in brilliant volumes and a wonderful way to honor your friend. I see, no issues with spelling sentence structure grammar or word choices. A great submission with a lovely birthday wish written by a talented hand I wish the best of luck have a great evening!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Lea, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Debi, I can't say that I know the poet writer. But you have written a lovely birthday greeting as yo often do to one of us. Thanks a lot for sharing
Ulla xx

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Ulla, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for our lovely Verna, and for her poem. She will enjoy reading all the birthday wishes too.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Aussie
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Partay? Or party. Your presentation was perfect. Birthday wishes for a very godly woman. The more of His messages of love we can get out there, the better. I don't know her but she is a child of god and a sister writing for the Blessed Lord. K xx

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Hey you! My special K. As in authors notes, I called and spelled. it Partay,
    LOL- I had to have a little fun w it so sometimes you have to break some rules. Thanks for the fun review and comments, my awesome friend.