Ghost
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I hope you do achieve your goal of living in peace, Lea. After the childhood you had your road to peace is also going to be hard won. Just one edit
Would (what) did you do to her.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I hope you do achieve your goal of living in peace, Lea. After the childhood you had your road to peace is also going to be hard won. Just one edit
Would (what) did you do to her.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I'm very good. Thank you. Her ego eyes amazing. I very much need that cause. I am a new writer hand sometimes I make mistakes for sure but I'm so happy to receive them. Thank you! You probably have ten the emails from me now l o l. I think you get for your kindness for your review and your great rating!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ugh. It's the old adage about going from the frying pan to the fire. Nothing ever gets easier for you girls. Just more terrifying and unnerving and upending. How you manage to keep your head so constantly in the game --especially at such a tender age-- just amazes me. It's the only reason you have come out on the other side as intact as you have. You have the strongest spirit I've ever seen. xoxox
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Ugh. It's the old adage about going from the frying pan to the fire. Nothing ever gets easier for you girls. Just more terrifying and unnerving and upending. How you manage to keep your head so constantly in the game --especially at such a tender age-- just amazes me. It's the only reason you have come out on the other side as intact as you have. You have the strongest spirit I've ever seen. xoxox
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Rachel, thank you so much for your wonderful reviews. As always I appreciate you, you have amazing insite. U, debbie and others have really been anamazing support! I do hope has your name in there with me. You have been more than an editor to me. So I'm wrapping my head around that too. Have an awesome day!
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Thanks, Sweetie. xo
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I hear you. I've been in a different kind of low time of battling where you feel every time you turn around, you must be ready to defend yourself. I hear you. I assure you that the peace you hope to have is within you. You can't imagine it nor see it but when you focus more on your own self care, peace is able to gravitate toward you. Move away from negativity if you feel it and be at peace with making your own positive life.
I think you are a much different person than those in your family. Maybe you are also surpressing some things. There is no rush when healing. As long as you get yourself to a daily safe existence, you can take however much time you need, to heal. So much had been told to you it seems, you did not have control of your own self direction. The goal now could be to do the work, be your own best friend, and pull your best friend, you inside, up and out to safety and a safe life that you can create for yourself. As soon as possible, remove the negative people from your mind. The more time that you allow them to stay in your mind, the worse it will be for you.
They don't deserve to take up a permanent residence inside of your mind, it seems. They've had their turns at creating the agenda for you. Now you are older and you will create your own agenda, and the very best life that you can imagine for yourself. And you will live that life, because you will put in the work and time to heal yourself. Look inside. Don't concern yourself with them. They messed up. Go out and create something good and new for yourself! I wish that for you!
Alex :))
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I hear you. I've been in a different kind of low time of battling where you feel every time you turn around, you must be ready to defend yourself. I hear you. I assure you that the peace you hope to have is within you. You can't imagine it nor see it but when you focus more on your own self care, peace is able to gravitate toward you. Move away from negativity if you feel it and be at peace with making your own positive life.
I think you are a much different person than those in your family. Maybe you are also surpressing some things. There is no rush when healing. As long as you get yourself to a daily safe existence, you can take however much time you need, to heal. So much had been told to you it seems, you did not have control of your own self direction. The goal now could be to do the work, be your own best friend, and pull your best friend, you inside, up and out to safety and a safe life that you can create for yourself. As soon as possible, remove the negative people from your mind. The more time that you allow them to stay in your mind, the worse it will be for you.
They don't deserve to take up a permanent residence inside of your mind, it seems. They've had their turns at creating the agenda for you. Now you are older and you will create your own agenda, and the very best life that you can imagine for yourself. And you will live that life, because you will put in the work and time to heal yourself. Look inside. Don't concern yourself with them. They messed up. Go out and create something good and new for yourself! I wish that for you!
Alex :))
Small typo note
could ve exponential
Small typo
Would did you do to her!?
When I'm emotional Iskr typos too.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Alex again, you're so insightful and so write on the money with your comment I'm doing now. It's very much encouraged by my a psychiatrist who I see regularly, I hope to put it all on the shelf when I'm finished with my goal and then live life at peace. Thank you again, my friend, have a great day!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
part of me wishes that you had a baseball bat in your hand when you confronted your stepfather. I can't understand your mom at all. The way she acts just isn't natural. Having your sister sent away could be a two edged sword. She was out of the house of monsters, but that left you alone to deal with the abuse. Even though they may not face justice here on earth, the time is coming when they will. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
part of me wishes that you had a baseball bat in your hand when you confronted your stepfather. I can't understand your mom at all. The way she acts just isn't natural. Having your sister sent away could be a two edged sword. She was out of the house of monsters, but that left you alone to deal with the abuse. Even though they may not face justice here on earth, the time is coming when they will. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Tom as always I appreciate you and your kind words And your reviews as well.
Thank you so much, have a great evening!
Comment from Teri7
I am so sorry you had to live through that. There are some really mean people in this world and some of them are our relatives. I hope your sister is o.k. wherever she is. You take it easy and write things that make you happy finally! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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I am so sorry you had to live through that. There are some really mean people in this world and some of them are our relatives. I hope your sister is o.k. wherever she is. You take it easy and write things that make you happy finally! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Teri I appreciate you! We're acting this up helps. I'll be able to put it in the box. Stick it up on the shelf and then complete. Sadly, life is never.
Simple, it seems to come in increments rather than one big shining answer. Thank you again for reading. I appreciate your kind comments and your insight, and also thanks for reading along, too. I'm happy to see your review come up, thanks again!
Comment from Chuck Keller
Well, you did it again.
I'm hooked.
Can't stop now.
Guess that's what great writers do..
And you are great!
Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.
I appreciate your talent and kindness.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Well, you did it again.
I'm hooked.
Can't stop now.
Guess that's what great writers do..
And you are great!
Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.
I appreciate your talent and kindness.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Chuck, thank you for being so amazing. I appreciate it!
I like you're writing too. You are definitely a talented human being, there's no doubt about it. Thank you again you're amazing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How very sad you were parted from your sister Lea and splitting the two of you up was another form of punishment. I can't understand why your Mother would want to continue to punish you up until this day unless she is afraid that everyone will be against her afte you release your story. It sounds like there is also some jealousy involved. Perhaps you should show her indifference. I hope you can live in peace one day Lea, another fine chapter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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How very sad you were parted from your sister Lea and splitting the two of you up was another form of punishment. I can't understand why your Mother would want to continue to punish you up until this day unless she is afraid that everyone will be against her afte you release your story. It sounds like there is also some jealousy involved. Perhaps you should show her indifference. I hope you can live in peace one day Lea, another fine chapter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much again with her. Unfortunately, I must cut the ties. The only way she can reach me is by what she's doing. it's sad really... I think she's just getting all scared now having to actually face her demons. Thank you again my friend for your wonderful review thank you so much!
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Cutting ties is the best way forward for you Lea, make a fresh start and put all this nonsense behind you. Life is too short to be bogged down with all this, you are doing the right thing, love Dolly x
Comment from Jim Wile
Lea, that was an appropriate title for this chapter, as you definitely came unglued here. In many ways it was easier to live in the woods and write about it when (except for that tumultuous storm at the end) the risks were known and the problems easier to deal with. Now it is all so unpredictable and far riskier for you.
If you need a break from all this, take it, but maybe it helps you just to keep going and get it all out there, in which case, keep going. This is a fascinating tale, but we will understand if you need a break. - Jim
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Lea, that was an appropriate title for this chapter, as you definitely came unglued here. In many ways it was easier to live in the woods and write about it when (except for that tumultuous storm at the end) the risks were known and the problems easier to deal with. Now it is all so unpredictable and far riskier for you.
If you need a break from all this, take it, but maybe it helps you just to keep going and get it all out there, in which case, keep going. This is a fascinating tale, but we will understand if you need a break. - Jim
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Jim, I did have a long sleep and I went down to one chapter. So now I'm ready to go back up to 2 again. Thank you so much.
As always, you are right on the money. Thanks again my friend!
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Glad you had a bit of a respite from it, Lea. Seemed like you needed it. This must be very taxing on you to relive this story, but I'm so glad you've chosen to do it for our sake as well as yours. Take care, my friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The sheer build-up of your frustration is palpable and I can really imagine that explosion of anger, anxiety and frustration. Thank Goodness, your mother was, for once, the voice of calm and reason. I was a little confused by "Drove through my friend and I was out. My mother they're looking down on me?" And "I forgot they were holding the wall as I went feeling like a bit spaghetti noodle?" But this continues to grip as you, hopefully make your way through this web of deceit and dysfunction. Take care Debbie x
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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The sheer build-up of your frustration is palpable and I can really imagine that explosion of anger, anxiety and frustration. Thank Goodness, your mother was, for once, the voice of calm and reason. I was a little confused by "Drove through my friend and I was out. My mother they're looking down on me?" And "I forgot they were holding the wall as I went feeling like a bit spaghetti noodle?" But this continues to grip as you, hopefully make your way through this web of deceit and dysfunction. Take care Debbie x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hi Debbie thank you yes I noticed too and have corrected them. Some I forget to change it to preview then I have to disable it by then the booboos can be seen. Thank you again my friend I appreciate this so very much have a grand day!
Comment from BethShelby
You are doing a wonderful job with this story and it looks like it may win stroy of the month. You are a good writer and when the is finished and published you need to keep writer. You are gifted. It is too bad the aunt couldn't take both of you.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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You are doing a wonderful job with this story and it looks like it may win stroy of the month. You are a good writer and when the is finished and published you need to keep writer. You are gifted. It is too bad the aunt couldn't take both of you.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you again Beth For all your kind words and thoughtfulness. I truly am honored to receive them enjoy your day!