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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I still look for them! I wonder if they even exist except in an old song.
Fantastic imagery, presentation, and of course, your wonderful haiku.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words .

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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A little luck never hurt anybody. Lol. I used to wear a stainless steel soldiers cross. I would hold it in my hand for luck. I would also hold it and pray for the men and women of the armed forces. I went a little off track but as you can see, your poem resonated with me. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    I'm happy your cross brought you luck and a way to remember our soldiers.

    Thank you very much, Gretchen.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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I remember finding them as a young child, the dual pictures were great, Gypsy. Finding one was very lucky. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    I used to look for 4 leaf clovers all the time when I was little. Thank you very much, Aryr. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 03-Nov-2023
    I still do! You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm curious how many of us have searched for four leaf clovers hoping to find one thinking our dreams would come true. I know as a young girl I sure did. Thank you for describing this sentiment so well for us in this perfect presentation.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Me too! Probably all kids do. Thank you very much, Barbara.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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starting to wonder if they exist - have only seen pictures LOL!

great lucky haiku!
good imagery
smooth flow
like the satori - perfect fit

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    They do exist! I used to look all the time when I was little. They are rare.

    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Wendyanne
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Oh yes I remember doing this a child but never found one. I enjoyed reading your haiku very much and it made me feel nostalgic. Thanks for sharing this

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, Wendy.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's a cute ambition but I think it would be easier if she got a an oxalis plant which has leaves that look like four-leaf clovers. Then she could set her sights on other dreams.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival