Hearts of stone
Poem 5/7/54 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellently said and depicted in your fine post. Your 5-7-5 verse strikes right at the 'heart' (sorry) of this subject in a succinct and memorable way. Well done! And good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Excellently said and depicted in your fine post. Your 5-7-5 verse strikes right at the 'heart' (sorry) of this subject in a succinct and memorable way. Well done! And good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Holding a grudge, or hating someone ... poisons our soul.. forgiving is the better solution.. I had a grudge against my father.
I wasted so much time being cold toward him ... when my mamma died, we ended up living together and finally, I opened my heart.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Holding a grudge, or hating someone ... poisons our soul.. forgiving is the better solution.. I had a grudge against my father.
I wasted so much time being cold toward him ... when my mamma died, we ended up living together and finally, I opened my heart.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thanks for sharing that personal story-it's always the personal stories make the biggest impact & a great review zanya
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a seemingly little poem but it's also a big ole important one! There is not much that is more important than forgiveness. The whole concept was big with me as a kid who tucked nightly notes under my entire large family's pillows. I was the littlest one and they were like, really you did nothing to apologize for; but I offered something as small as it was.
I truly enjoyed this with your perfect presentation, too.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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This is a seemingly little poem but it's also a big ole important one! There is not much that is more important than forgiveness. The whole concept was big with me as a kid who tucked nightly notes under my entire large family's pillows. I was the littlest one and they were like, really you did nothing to apologize for; but I offered something as small as it was.
I truly enjoyed this with your perfect presentation, too.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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A most interesting review & thanks for sharing those personal stories.zanya
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It is an excellent and powerful poem on forgiveness. It is so true if one carries anger and hate for others, in time, it is themselves that becomes bitter and angry.
So well stated.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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It is an excellent and powerful poem on forgiveness. It is so true if one carries anger and hate for others, in time, it is themselves that becomes bitter and angry.
So well stated.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Great review-thanks for sharing zanya