One Man's Calling
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. It seems that Ben and Beth's marriage is starting well. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. It seems that Ben and Beth's marriage is starting well. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Another great chapter! I just wish I knew what Ben and Luther said when Ben gave his notice. Wasn't Luther disappointed? He offered even Beth a job. And Beth's father offered the house. Then they just go right off and leave! Oh well, that's his calling, I know.
"How many days do you want. (question mark)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Another great chapter! I just wish I knew what Ben and Luther said when Ben gave his notice. Wasn't Luther disappointed? He offered even Beth a job. And Beth's father offered the house. Then they just go right off and leave! Oh well, that's his calling, I know.
"How many days do you want. (question mark)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Yes, a Luther and Ben conversation would be appropriate.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
When people belong together everything works. This is moving along really well. Today I was interrupted by the delivery of a mattress and the exterminator. This ate up a lot of my time. Good writing mister.
Karen
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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When people belong together everything works. This is moving along really well. Today I was interrupted by the delivery of a mattress and the exterminator. This ate up a lot of my time. Good writing mister.
Karen
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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You write well :-)
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blushy face here
You are too kind.
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:-)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It's wonderful that Ben has a life and is moving on in his ministry. Beth seems to be the perfect wife as she is adventurous and has great Bible comprehension so they can discuss it.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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It's wonderful that Ben has a life and is moving on in his ministry. Beth seems to be the perfect wife as she is adventurous and has great Bible comprehension so they can discuss it.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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Thank you. Excitement coming!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sir, I'm sure a street preacher just has to get out whatever kind of message he can in a hurry, hoping to reach whoever might be listening and not trying to dodge him. But this time, Ben's found a ready made church just waiting for someone to preach the gospel. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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Yes, sir, I'm sure a street preacher just has to get out whatever kind of message he can in a hurry, hoping to reach whoever might be listening and not trying to dodge him. But this time, Ben's found a ready made church just waiting for someone to preach the gospel. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Judith B.
This is a sweet story and shows the way I wish the world is/was--filled with good people doing good things for each other. It is interesting that someone in that era notes the difference in a pastor and a preacher. I am anxious to read about his first sermon and weddings.
Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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This is a sweet story and shows the way I wish the world is/was--filled with good people doing good things for each other. It is interesting that someone in that era notes the difference in a pastor and a preacher. I am anxious to read about his first sermon and weddings.
Good job.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Rest assured that Ben has had his share of life's difficulties. He's been beaten to the point of serious injury, shot, and killed in a mine shaft. He was shanghaied and later framed and imprisoned, sentenced to hang.
But rather than complain, he praises God.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Wayne, you need some dialogue tags to help us to understand who is speaking. For instance, you're talking about Beth's parents and then someone is offering his house for the honeymoon. I thought it was someone from the church or her parents until they began talking about the gardens.
You have the line, "Guess I will at that" then you begin, "So, I've given it some thought . . ." I thought the speaker had changed since you began a new line, so that threw me off a little. Dialogue tags would help this whole conversation.
"I'm bringin; you both a piece a' pie . . ." remove the semi-colon
Well, I'm wondering if this becomes a weekly gig for Ben, but 35 miles seems a long way to have to travel in a buggy to preach. Still, you haven't planted the seed:-) And I can't imagine he'll leave Luther and Beth's parents. But, it is his calling.
Just wondering out loud.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Wayne, you need some dialogue tags to help us to understand who is speaking. For instance, you're talking about Beth's parents and then someone is offering his house for the honeymoon. I thought it was someone from the church or her parents until they began talking about the gardens.
You have the line, "Guess I will at that" then you begin, "So, I've given it some thought . . ." I thought the speaker had changed since you began a new line, so that threw me off a little. Dialogue tags would help this whole conversation.
"I'm bringin; you both a piece a' pie . . ." remove the semi-colon
Well, I'm wondering if this becomes a weekly gig for Ben, but 35 miles seems a long way to have to travel in a buggy to preach. Still, you haven't planted the seed:-) And I can't imagine he'll leave Luther and Beth's parents. But, it is his calling.
Just wondering out loud.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Wonder away. I need it.
At 3-4 this A.M. I posted and then did a bunch of editing - big mistake! It was prob'ly better before the editing. (growly face here)
Thank you for the review, and for the help.
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How do you think at 3 a.m., lol? I get up at 4:00. Yes, get it right before you post it - and get some sleep!
Comment from Jim Wile
Things seem to be moving along quite rapidly now. Are we nearing the conclusion? You've hinted at further travels like to Alaska, so maybe not, but Ben seems to have found some stability in his life and it seems like he could be happy settling here and starting a family. We'll see.
I really like Beth. She seems like a good match for Ben.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Things seem to be moving along quite rapidly now. Are we nearing the conclusion? You've hinted at further travels like to Alaska, so maybe not, but Ben seems to have found some stability in his life and it seems like he could be happy settling here and starting a family. We'll see.
I really like Beth. She seems like a good match for Ben.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Thank you!
It's about half way, depending on how you count. (smiley face here)
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to know that God is allowing Ben to have the love of good woman in his life. This will be a new direction for him in some ways but she should be a bit help to him. She is willing follow wherever God leads Ben.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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It is good to know that God is allowing Ben to have the love of good woman in his life. This will be a new direction for him in some ways but she should be a bit help to him. She is willing follow wherever God leads Ben.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Thank you. That is the plan, but watch for twists.
Comment from royowen
It looks like Ben Persons, has not only found a wife, but he's found. a church to preach in, and and his new Bride Beth, who is learning scripture according and quickly, this could be the opportunity that gGod has given him to be able to preach and evangelise, beautifully written Wayne, well done. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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It looks like Ben Persons, has not only found a wife, but he's found. a church to preach in, and and his new Bride Beth, who is learning scripture according and quickly, this could be the opportunity that gGod has given him to be able to preach and evangelise, beautifully written Wayne, well done. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review. But hold on. Ben isn't easily predicted.
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That?s true, nor is any godly man
