Outside View
60 words7 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahahahaha. Now that's cute. I (a) was NOT expecting that ending and (b) enjoyed the mysterious vibe your started with. Great entry; I bet it will do well for you, Mystery Contestant. Good luck. xo
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Hahahahaha. Now that's cute. I (a) was NOT expecting that ending and (b) enjoyed the mysterious vibe your started with. Great entry; I bet it will do well for you, Mystery Contestant. Good luck. xo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hahaha! Excellent! Such a neat little scene here with plenty of expectation as your well expressed flash progressed. Your silly ending then put a smile on my face. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Hahaha! Excellent! Such a neat little scene here with plenty of expectation as your well expressed flash progressed. Your silly ending then put a smile on my face. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest is really cute. I was thinking it was something else. Great ending twist.
Good flash fiction form and word count.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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This entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest is really cute. I was thinking it was something else. Great ending twist.
Good flash fiction form and word count.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Mia Twysted
The picture is great it sets the mood. Although I don't drink coffee I could see myself standing there with a cup looking out. Suddenly, I see movement and then a smile spreads across my face. Just my kitty cat. Well done.
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The picture is great it sets the mood. Although I don't drink coffee I could see myself standing there with a cup looking out. Suddenly, I see movement and then a smile spreads across my face. Just my kitty cat. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this humorous piece and you made me smile and I wish you luck with the contest, a fun post.
Just one suggestion for this line:
It (was) my view of the world, of reality.
Love Dolly x x x
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I loved this humorous piece and you made me smile and I wish you luck with the contest, a fun post.
Just one suggestion for this line:
It (was) my view of the world, of reality.
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from L. Kalere
Well that brings out some great memories. Tweetie and Sylvester, two favorites. I like the way you built the "intrigue." Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
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Well that brings out some great memories. Tweetie and Sylvester, two favorites. I like the way you built the "intrigue." Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very neat piece.
Couple of minor fixes:
It wa my view of the world, of reality.
(Was)
through the bars of my cage iI offered my first
(It)
Easy fixes to tighten up this wonderful write!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Very neat piece.
Couple of minor fixes:
It wa my view of the world, of reality.
(Was)
through the bars of my cage iI offered my first
(It)
Easy fixes to tighten up this wonderful write!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Whoops! Fingers quicker than the mind methinks!!
