The Disturbance
Don't be too shocked, it did not happen.4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHA. Way better ending than I feared!! This reminds me of a Halloween piece I offer to my piano students. The tune is Chopin's Halloween, and the words are about hearing something under the bed. The final lyric is: "Scratch, sniff, meow; it's my kitty cat named Fred." LOL.
Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer! xo
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HAHAHAHA. Way better ending than I feared!! This reminds me of a Halloween piece I offer to my piano students. The tune is Chopin's Halloween, and the words are about hearing something under the bed. The final lyric is: "Scratch, sniff, meow; it's my kitty cat named Fred." LOL.
Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer! xo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very characteristic of a cat! Your 60 word dash is well expressed and, even in its economic form, builds tension until the feline culprit is finally found. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Very characteristic of a cat! Your 60 word dash is well expressed and, even in its economic form, builds tension until the feline culprit is finally found. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Haha. Oh that's so cute! Cats can be fun for sure. You followed the contest rules perfectly and introduced a cute little picture, too, Kitty, cats are cute. No issues was spelling grammar sentence structure or subject matters you gotta cute little poem nice submission. I hope you have a great night!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Haha. Oh that's so cute! Cats can be fun for sure. You followed the contest rules perfectly and introduced a cute little picture, too, Kitty, cats are cute. No issues was spelling grammar sentence structure or subject matters you gotta cute little poem nice submission. I hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Lea, for this wise review I love it when my imagination conjures such as this.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great little story that gave me, a hater of mice, a good chuckle. You set up the tension we as Alma, broom at the ready, crept up to the pantry. Well done with your 60 word Dash and good luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Great little story that gave me, a hater of mice, a good chuckle. You set up the tension we as Alma, broom at the ready, crept up to the pantry. Well done with your 60 word Dash and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Well done for your perseverance Pearl. I am none too fond of mice myself. Thank you for those kind words