My Spirit Says Yes!
Poetry2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is an incredibly introspective piece of work. It seemed heartfelt and genuine.
I enjoy strong poetry like this. Not sure how closely it relayed li to you personally but it is a good piece.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This is an incredibly introspective piece of work. It seemed heartfelt and genuine.
I enjoy strong poetry like this. Not sure how closely it relayed li to you personally but it is a good piece.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback. Yes this poem is base on my personal relationship with God. It from came from my heart. I so glad able share a piece of art to open readers. Thank you 😊
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Nicely done!
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This is a very beautiful poem. I love its rhythm and its rhymes.
Am I mistaken, or did you forget a word in the line "I thank God every for listen to my chimes." ? Did you mean "I thank God every DAY..." ?
This is a true faith poem, thank you very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This is a very beautiful poem. I love its rhythm and its rhymes.
Am I mistaken, or did you forget a word in the line "I thank God every for listen to my chimes." ? Did you mean "I thank God every DAY..." ?
This is a true faith poem, thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback. My apologies for the error. I can see how it?s sound confusing. But I corrected the wording. I suffer from dyslexia.
So some times I forget certain words or misspell things Lol. 🥴🤭
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No nedd to apologize. I sometimes read and read agin my works many times, and once it's posted, I realize that some mistakes escaped to me too. Regards.
