If You Could See Behind My Eyes
Discovering her reality2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
You set the scene marvelously with the very first sentence. What could she be scared of? Then we climb into her mind until the bandages are removed. And now we wonder where she is. A potent story told in only 60 words. Rod
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You set the scene marvelously with the very first sentence. What could she be scared of? Then we climb into her mind until the bandages are removed. And now we wonder where she is. A potent story told in only 60 words. Rod
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never had perfect eyesight and I would love to know what it is like to see things properly, I loved your revelatory words here, this is very uplifting, (where are my glasses!) love Dolly x x x
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I have never had perfect eyesight and I would love to know what it is like to see things properly, I loved your revelatory words here, this is very uplifting, (where are my glasses!) love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023