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Autumn Serenade

Fall's seasonal song of praise

9 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi BB.
This is a well written poem. It says a lot in 5 lines about your love of nature and its beauty. It uses personification and metaphor well.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024

Comment from mrsmajor
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A beautiful description of Autumn...with a colorful picture to enhance it's colors...all following the required ABC poetry form...I wish you well in the contest, I enjoyed the total picture, and the idea of the dancing leaves...surely added depth to your words...

Thanks for sharing...

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, life is a grand ballet. Autumn is my favorite season, and you did a wonderful job of capturing why in this contest entry. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Everyone and their Aunt Minnie is writing in this contest. I was one of the first ones, and there was only one other at the time. Now, it seems all I am reviewing is for this contest. Even though I am in it, I wish you good luck. Karen

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

Comment from karenina
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Very nice ABC poem about my favorite season! There is a special "tune" to Autumn... A jazzy, chill sax, maybe...a riff of piano keys running up the scale and back down... The smooth sassy voice of the breathy singer on the wind. I feel your imagery here, Eugene!

Karenina

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is great I like the last linen's palm especially. You're quite a thoughtful writer, and you have lovely word choices too. And you create your dose of magic every time you make a new poem. Esthetically, it's beautiful and grammatically, it's perfect. You've had a great submission here. Good luck to you have a awesome day!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
    Lea,

    Thank you for your review. Your reviews are always welcomed as you offer an abundance of encouragement with your uplifting and thoughtful words.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well, I think you achieved this ABC with skilful flow and evocative imagery of Autumn. The dancing movement of the leaves is particularly vivid. Good luck, Eugene! Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

Comment from BethShelby
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This is a nice ABC poem and a good entry for the contest. I like the idea of the colorful leaves happily singing praises song and dancing on the gentle breeze in live grand ballet.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

Comment from Sally Law
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Beautifully written and illustrated poem of the most beautiful season of all, Autumn. I enjoyed the "w" alliteration throughout too. Very creative.

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023