All Hallows' Eve
This is a halloween poem.46 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a creepy poem. Watch out for all those little things going bump in the night. It might be Mr. Creep or Mr. Reap.--Excellent names for your characters, fun by they conjure scary images.
I like the fun rhyming scheme and the way it loops itself back to the beginning rhyme.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This is a creepy poem. Watch out for all those little things going bump in the night. It might be Mr. Creep or Mr. Reap.--Excellent names for your characters, fun by they conjure scary images.
I like the fun rhyming scheme and the way it loops itself back to the beginning rhyme.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Debi.Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the creepy imagery and rhyme scheme. A little scare has always been a part of the holiday for us.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and stars very much, my friend.
Best wishes for great Thanksgiving.
Robert
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Thanks for the creepy Halloween poem. We're sitting down to dinner and waiting to be heading to answer the door every few minutes. Happy Halloween to you and yours!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Lol! Thanks for the creepy Halloween poem. We're sitting down to dinner and waiting to be heading to answer the door every few minutes. Happy Halloween to you and yours!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Helen.Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the spooky imagery and rhymes.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
We don't get many trick-or-treaters any more. They're all at parties.
Best wishes.
Robert
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We were so busy with at least a hundred. I was worried we wouldn't have enough candy so I bought a box of fidget toys and they were a hit.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece read well and easily. The quick pace made it seem like there were things just out of arms reach that were coming for me. I felt aware of the space I was in, wanting to be aware and stay alert, waiting for someone or something to jump at me.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This piece read well and easily. The quick pace made it seem like there were things just out of arms reach that were coming for me. I felt aware of the space I was in, wanting to be aware and stay alert, waiting for someone or something to jump at me.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Mia. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the creepy imagery and rhymes.
Fortunately, it's only a poem. :)
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehe... perfect spooky poem for Halloween. I love horror in general and I love your poem and presentation.
Happy Halloween!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hehe... perfect spooky poem for Halloween. I love horror in general and I love your poem and presentation.
Happy Halloween!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Gypsy. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the spooky imagery and rhymes
The Halloween poems just aren't the same without Dean.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much, my friend.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very well written piece of Halloween poetry in which the poet describes the scene very vividly. I wondered whether "slimmest thread" might read better as "thinnest thread" because it would be alliterative but it is, of course, your poem. Well done
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This is a very well written piece of Halloween poetry in which the poet describes the scene very vividly. I wondered whether "slimmest thread" might read better as "thinnest thread" because it would be alliterative but it is, of course, your poem. Well done
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Wendyanne. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the scary imagery and rhymes.
Yes, thinnest thread also works nicely in the spot. I do try to avoid to much alliteration.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Douglas Goff
This has a great rhyming pattern which gives it a dance like rhythm. Monster Mashish.
The Halloween pieces are great, and this is no exception!
D
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This has a great rhyming pattern which gives it a dance like rhythm. Monster Mashish.
The Halloween pieces are great, and this is no exception!
D
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Douglas. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the creepy imagery and rhymes.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Robert,
what a great poem for Halloween. Good advise too. I see that the moon is still pretty full. It ought to be an interesting Halloween this year. I truly enjoyed this, thanks so much for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Robert,
what a great poem for Halloween. Good advise too. I see that the moon is still pretty full. It ought to be an interesting Halloween this year. I truly enjoyed this, thanks so much for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Tom. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the scary imagery. A full is a nice addition to Halloween.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Dawn Munro
You have to know I'd gravitate
to anything that you create,
but please, I quiver and debate -
to read a verse that's by a mate
and sure to keep me up quite late...? (*grin*)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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You have to know I'd gravitate
to anything that you create,
but please, I quiver and debate -
to read a verse that's by a mate
and sure to keep me up quite late...? (*grin*)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hello Dawn. Thank you for the marvelous, poetic review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed? the scary imagery and rhymes.
I appreciated the encouraging and stars comments very much, my friend. Hope all is well.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Very much my pleasure!
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, Robert, you scared me! Of course I'm a scardy-cat and especially on All Hallows Eve! Spooky good in rhyming poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and a Happy Halloween to you both.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Oh, Robert, you scared me! Of course I'm a scardy-cat and especially on All Hallows Eve! Spooky good in rhyming poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and a Happy Halloween to you both.
Sal :))
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Hello Sally. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the creepy imagery and rhymes.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much, and Happy Halloween to you too.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice Halloween poem, Robert. I don't think I've seen that rhyme scheme before. It flows very nicely. I think this is a good poem middle age children.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Very nice Halloween poem, Robert. I don't think I've seen that rhyme scheme before. It flows very nicely. I think this is a good poem middle age children.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Hello Paul. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my Halloween poem. I?m glad you enjoyed the creepy imagery. The rhyme scheme came from Omar Khayyam about thousand years ago. I've used it several times, along with Robert Frost and others.
I appreciated the encouraging comments very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Shame on me for not recognizing "Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening."