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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It is fascinating and beautiful. Beautifully written and presented. Your words and presentation put your readers in a dreamy state.
Simply stunning.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Mary,

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I think the body of water was beautiful, a great sunset. The words were wise but they showed that lovers did exist from the beyond. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 29-Oct-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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The summer can be intoxicating. We seem to become different people during the summer. The nights are longer and full of possibilities. The vacation bug hits. It's like school vacation for grownups. Great post. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Lovely way to see the romance in the sunset as the sun kissing the sea and the sky blushes! No wonder there are so many who like to walk at sunset together!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much big sister. I appreciate that you always know what I mean.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from BermyBye50
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Gypsy,

This is a magnificent poem for the Body of Water Haiku. You set a high standard for writing Japanese poetry and I am pleased to call you my mentor and teacher.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional
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This is an excellent poem. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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how about just "sky blushes"? just a thought lol

good haiku with good imagery
i like the lovers meet in blue
brings a cool picture to mind

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    I got rid of 'shy' I don't know what I was thinking. LoL

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Wendyanne
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This is a beautiful piece of well written poetry in haiku style. I can picture the romantic scene so vividly as you have described it perfectly. "Shy blushing sky." Lovely!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully written club entry with us. I now know why we get the beautiful reds in the sunset. The sky is blushing as the lovers meet at the sea. Every time I see a reddish tinge to the sunset, I will remember that lovers are meeting at the sea. I think that's a perfect way to think about it. Thank you.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs