2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It is fascinating and beautiful. Beautifully written and presented. Your words and presentation put your readers in a dreamy state.
Simply stunning.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
It is fascinating and beautiful. Beautifully written and presented. Your words and presentation put your readers in a dreamy state.
Simply stunning.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Mary,
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I think the body of water was beautiful, a great sunset. The words were wise but they showed that lovers did exist from the beyond. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I think the body of water was beautiful, a great sunset. The words were wise but they showed that lovers did exist from the beyond. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
The summer can be intoxicating. We seem to become different people during the summer. The nights are longer and full of possibilities. The vacation bug hits. It's like school vacation for grownups. Great post. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
The summer can be intoxicating. We seem to become different people during the summer. The nights are longer and full of possibilities. The vacation bug hits. It's like school vacation for grownups. Great post. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely way to see the romance in the sunset as the sun kissing the sea and the sky blushes! No wonder there are so many who like to walk at sunset together!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
Lovely way to see the romance in the sunset as the sun kissing the sea and the sky blushes! No wonder there are so many who like to walk at sunset together!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. I appreciate that you always know what I mean.
Love
Marival
Comment from BermyBye50
Gypsy,
This is a magnificent poem for the Body of Water Haiku. You set a high standard for writing Japanese poetry and I am pleased to call you my mentor and teacher.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
Gypsy,
This is a magnificent poem for the Body of Water Haiku. You set a high standard for writing Japanese poetry and I am pleased to call you my mentor and teacher.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
This is an excellent poem. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
how about just "sky blushes"? just a thought lol
good haiku with good imagery
i like the lovers meet in blue
brings a cool picture to mind
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
how about just "sky blushes"? just a thought lol
good haiku with good imagery
i like the lovers meet in blue
brings a cool picture to mind
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I got rid of 'shy' I don't know what I was thinking. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a beautiful piece of well written poetry in haiku style. I can picture the romantic scene so vividly as you have described it perfectly. "Shy blushing sky." Lovely!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
This is a beautiful piece of well written poetry in haiku style. I can picture the romantic scene so vividly as you have described it perfectly. "Shy blushing sky." Lovely!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written club entry with us. I now know why we get the beautiful reds in the sunset. The sky is blushing as the lovers meet at the sea. Every time I see a reddish tinge to the sunset, I will remember that lovers are meeting at the sea. I think that's a perfect way to think about it. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written club entry with us. I now know why we get the beautiful reds in the sunset. The sky is blushing as the lovers meet at the sea. Every time I see a reddish tinge to the sunset, I will remember that lovers are meeting at the sea. I think that's a perfect way to think about it. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs