2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
"...then watching them roll out again...
just sitting on the dock of the bay wasting time..."
great sunset pier haiku
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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"...then watching them roll out again...
just sitting on the dock of the bay wasting time..."
great sunset pier haiku
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Yeah I was thinking about the song.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures showed both a lonely young woman sitting at the end of pier and a wonderful wave of the ocean. This was a fantastic haiku, your words proved that you watched the boats roll by. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures showed both a lonely young woman sitting at the end of pier and a wonderful wave of the ocean. This was a fantastic haiku, your words proved that you watched the boats roll by. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When life gets too much, we can do along the beach and listen to the waves and it's very calming. At least I think so. Your presentation is the beauty we've come to enjoy and expect from your post. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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When life gets too much, we can do along the beach and listen to the waves and it's very calming. At least I think so. Your presentation is the beauty we've come to enjoy and expect from your post. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
It's amazing if you listen to nature how you learn to trust it. You find a little bit of yourself in the natural flow of nature. This was a stirring piece. Anytime anxiety rears its ugly head with me, I walk to the beach and just listen. Sometimes the answers are hidden on the tide. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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It's amazing if you listen to nature how you learn to trust it. You find a little bit of yourself in the natural flow of nature. This was a stirring piece. Anytime anxiety rears its ugly head with me, I walk to the beach and just listen. Sometimes the answers are hidden on the tide. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
your image fits the poem perfectly... and is also stunning!
The way in which you tie your first two line with your satori gives strength to the movement... whether that be waves, or indeed the incoming tide bringing the knowing of the echoes of friendship.
I seem to take on a personal set of emotions as water. Ocean, waves separate continents and countries, yet also tether us all together within its entity.
This haunting Haiku swirls around in my minds eye searching distant shores in the silence of our aloneness=all oneness!
Absolutely a beautiful presentation, composition and construction señorita MariVal.
With our thoughts we create...
the trade winds of connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
******stars!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Hi MariVal,
your image fits the poem perfectly... and is also stunning!
The way in which you tie your first two line with your satori gives strength to the movement... whether that be waves, or indeed the incoming tide bringing the knowing of the echoes of friendship.
I seem to take on a personal set of emotions as water. Ocean, waves separate continents and countries, yet also tether us all together within its entity.
This haunting Haiku swirls around in my minds eye searching distant shores in the silence of our aloneness=all oneness!
Absolutely a beautiful presentation, composition and construction señorita MariVal.
With our thoughts we create...
the trade winds of connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
******stars!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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AL oneness... I love it!
James, it's so good to hear from you.
Thank you for the intuitive and insightful review. You are always so good at it.
I hope you and Jade are having a fantastic and restful weekend.
Abrazos y besos
Marival
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This kind of solitude is healing and pleasing and I enjoyed the ambience here.
I have a suggestion for the last line:
(befriended (are) waves)
Much enjoyed.
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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This kind of solitude is healing and pleasing and I enjoyed the ambience here.
I have a suggestion for the last line:
(befriended (are) waves)
Much enjoyed.
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's the great thing about nature. We can make friends with the moon and the waves and they will always understand and listen. Well said and I like your illustration, too!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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That's the great thing about nature. We can make friends with the moon and the waves and they will always understand and listen. Well said and I like your illustration, too!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you,, big sister, I appreciate your kind review.
Love
Marival