Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Hahaha! This just eliminated any feelings of granduer. We named or second daughter Keirry. Pronounced key ree. People call her Carrie, Kerry. Just because you get a beautiful or unusual name doesn't mean people will bother to learn how to say it. This was fun. Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thanks Gretchen! My last name is pronounced greemes or grimace sometimes by telemarketers. Telltale sign it?s not a friend calling you. I?m so glad you liked it, thank you so much for the kind review! :)

Comment from JSD

Excellent

I'm not sure if this is a joke or real, but it is very clever and surreally funny. So well done, regardless, on this well done Flash!

John

"Poetry is the space between words."

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you John! I just heard a story about the name and it is true, yet I wrote it as a fictional piece. I?m glad you liked it, thank you for the kind review!

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and imagery that will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you Alexandra!