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Praying for peace

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Comment from Wendy G
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Very true, and a good reminder of the origins of both nations. The enmity goes right back to the beginning. Excellent and thought provoking poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
    Thanks, Wendy.
Comment from Sarita Méndez
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There is a French song in which the first couplet says something like that when I translate it :

Abraham had two children, Ismael, Israel,
They shared a brotherly love since 5000 years.
From the bottom of their souls, they wanted to serve the Lord,
The first one built the Islam, the second one Israel.

Your haikus is very evocative, thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
    Thank you!