2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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16 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Gypsy Blue Rose,
Congrats on the 1st place win in the Cinquain Poetry contest. Your mastery of Haiku and Japanese poetic forms is evident in this beautifully written poem about autumn. Your carefully selected words come together perfectly to paint a comforting masterpiece of the arrival of the fall season.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Gypsy Blue Rose,
Congrats on the 1st place win in the Cinquain Poetry contest. Your mastery of Haiku and Japanese poetic forms is evident in this beautifully written poem about autumn. Your carefully selected words come together perfectly to paint a comforting masterpiece of the arrival of the fall season.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
How did I miss this? Congrats on your contest win, Gypsy! And very well deserved. This is a beautifully expressed and presented cinquain and a delight to read. Thank you so much. Debbie xos
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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How did I miss this? Congrats on your contest win, Gypsy! And very well deserved. This is a beautifully expressed and presented cinquain and a delight to read. Thank you so much. Debbie xos
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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I have limited amount of time to review so I am always broke LoL I have been trying to promote one of my daily posts. A lot of the unpromoted posts go unnoticed. I just have a few reviewers who read all my stuff. I don't blame fanstorians that wont read the broke poems LoL
Thank you very much, may you have a fabulous weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
The wind performs its own symphony, one with its own melodies and harmonies, even unexpected changes in tempo. Often, we must simply stop and listen.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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The wind performs its own symphony, one with its own melodies and harmonies, even unexpected changes in tempo. Often, we must simply stop and listen.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Mark, have a wonderful day.
Your friend, Gypsy
Comment from zanya
A superb vignette here in this Cinquain of the sights and sounds of the autumnal season as it progresses and Nature moves towards the dormant season. A worthy winner.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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A superb vignette here in this Cinquain of the sights and sounds of the autumnal season as it progresses and Nature moves towards the dormant season. A worthy winner.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Zanya, have a wonderful day.
Your friend, Gypsy
Comment from L. Kalere
Stunning imagery and excellent metaphor. Outstanding overall presentation, definitely on a professional level. Congratulations on taking first place. There's no doubt you deserve it.
Linda
I love "forest symphony".
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Stunning imagery and excellent metaphor. Outstanding overall presentation, definitely on a professional level. Congratulations on taking first place. There's no doubt you deserve it.
Linda
I love "forest symphony".
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six-star review, Linda, have a wonderful day.
Your friend, Gypsy
Comment from Carol Clark2
The use of the senses in this Cinquain is amazing! I especially like the symphony that's played by the wind. Thanks for the information in your notes -- very helpful. Congrats on being the contest winner! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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The use of the senses in this Cinquain is amazing! I especially like the symphony that's played by the wind. Thanks for the information in your notes -- very helpful. Congrats on being the contest winner! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Carol.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Well deserved!
Comment from Neonewman
Beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy, and congratulations on your 1st place win, well deserved. The artwork you have chosen is spectacular as well.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy, and congratulations on your 1st place win, well deserved. The artwork you have chosen is spectacular as well.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Steve.
I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from starkat
Congratulations on winning the contest !!!
This piece is beautifully written and presented. You have a deep understanding of this form and how to use it effectively. Also, you have an exceptional handle on how to utilize the Advanced Editor- and make this an elegant and appealing piece worthy of being published in a book. I love the artwork and color schemes. You have a real talent. Bravo!
Also, thanks for the notes about the cinquain. Cheers .. ;0)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Congratulations on winning the contest !!!
This piece is beautifully written and presented. You have a deep understanding of this form and how to use it effectively. Also, you have an exceptional handle on how to utilize the Advanced Editor- and make this an elegant and appealing piece worthy of being published in a book. I love the artwork and color schemes. You have a real talent. Bravo!
Also, thanks for the notes about the cinquain. Cheers .. ;0)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal
This is a beautiful mix of metaphor and personification of the autumn wind and the sounds it makes in the trees and leaves.
Congrats on winning the conrtest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Hi MariVal
This is a beautiful mix of metaphor and personification of the autumn wind and the sounds it makes in the trees and leaves.
Congrats on winning the conrtest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week
Joan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Joan.
I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Don't mention it, MariVal
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you :) I really appreciate it.
Gypsy
