Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Nicki,

This was a cute and humorous entry in the 3-5-7 poem contest. The artwork was perfect for this contest, Congrats on your 2nd place win.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

I was hoping the funnier side would prevail. Taken seriously, it's all too real. Thanks so much for the review.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 6 votes.

A timely topic.

There is a lot going on in the world and mostly it's ugly stuff....chaos, crime , war etc.

I have chosen to keep up with it all but there are days that I think I'm wasting my time seeing I have no way to stop it.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thanks for the review. You're so right. Good news would be great. Not holding my breath,

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work because it depicts what most humans feel during overwhelming times. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. There is the most power in knowing, though, because only when we know of a problem can we fix it and comfort those who are hurt by it.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thank you for your review and astute thoughts.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-7, Sweet Oblivion, has the proper formatting and finds that the public would just as soon be protected and not know how or why that is accomplished.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thank you for the review.