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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We have a bunch of these little darling in our yard, especially in my Pride of Barbados plants. They seem to dearly love them. Thank you for sharing this presentation with us and highlighting these marvelous little birds.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Barbara.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is just perfect for describing the hummingbird. It visually places this tiny dancer in the mind of your reader.
The presentation is stunning and fits well with your haiku.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye
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i like hummingbirds - they can fly backwards! and their wings flap so fast it's amazing they don't get tired lol!

great haiku with nice imagery and fun word choices - they do kinda look like little dancers...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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That was the perfect description of a hummingbird. A tiny dancer. A tiny, yet feisty one, to boot. I love how you brought this into the imagery that captured my imagination. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Do like your vivid description of the hummingbird in your poem. Color scheme and illustration just add nicely to your overall presentation.

I would have preferred a different adjective to describe your hummingbird in your satori -- small? or hummingbird flutters/jiggles?

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka
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They are amazing dancers those excitable zooming hummingbirds! I like that you chose the verb "tango" to show that dramatic dance. Everybody loves the colibri!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from RodG
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This is a lovely haiku. We can easily visualize your hummingbird "tangoing" with the sweet blooms of Spring.
Great personification of the bird as a dancer. Rod

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Rod. May you have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent haiku poem and colorful. Your presentation. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers, with sensory words too. Have a good week.

Best wishes,

Alexan

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Alexan. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs