Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge and your presentation is very good, too. Your Author Note is good. You also use evocative words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Thanks for reading my entry and your nice words. I had a good time writing this. But, the temp climbed back above 90 here so the mood has faded! Have a great Fall with lots of fun!

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thanks, but good-bye. They disqualified my entry for some obscure meter rule. So, I quit the club. b4reese@yahoo.com

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thanks, but good-by. They disqualified my entry for some obscure meter rule. So, I quit the club. b4reese@yahoo.com

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

On the brink of winter and I am glad you are still enjoying the sport on TV, you made me smile with this one as Autumn means different things to different people, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Always great to hear from you. Thanks for stopping by. Hope your Fall is festive, and your winter is mild.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Oct-2023

Thank you for your kind words x

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thanks, but good-by. They disqualified my entry for some obscure meter rule. So, I quit the club. b4reese@yahoo.com

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 22-Oct-2023

Oh yes it requires iambic Tetrameter x x x

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Wish you had told me, but we are amateurs here and the exact details of such are hard to remember. Anyway, it has been a fun ride but it was getting old. I am getting old. Good luck and God Bless.