Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Two Cents"Miranda tries to find Dougie.
18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww bless him. Your characters are fabulous, Aaron, Waylon, Mitch, Miranda, and on, they are all such lovely people. I know Miranda wouldn't like me saying that, but it's true. Now, I'm going on to the next one. I'm really enjoying this story. I love Miranda! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Aww bless him. Your characters are fabulous, Aaron, Waylon, Mitch, Miranda, and on, they are all such lovely people. I know Miranda wouldn't like me saying that, but it's true. Now, I'm going on to the next one. I'm really enjoying this story. I love Miranda! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thanks again. I'm so glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
Mitch and Miranda would like to be alone but that isn't going to happen. Too many people in their lives to allow that. It does give them the opportunity to think about how nice Saturday will be. Miranda is so believable and her emotions genuine.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Mitch and Miranda would like to be alone but that isn't going to happen. Too many people in their lives to allow that. It does give them the opportunity to think about how nice Saturday will be. Miranda is so believable and her emotions genuine.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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They don't seem to get a break. Some off screen character will always interrupt them. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your characters are fully drawn. We feel them. It's kind of like the "Andy Griffith Show" with menaces.
I look forward to the next installment. I owe you two.
Karen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Your characters are fully drawn. We feel them. It's kind of like the "Andy Griffith Show" with menaces.
I look forward to the next installment. I owe you two.
Karen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. Like Leave it to Beaver wedding a cleaver. Lol. Gretchen
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Have a good weekend. What's left. :-) Karen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ah, Miranda; so tough on the outside, so gooey on the inside. She is just so lovable and RELATABLE, and I love her relationships with the men in her life. You do such a great job drawing her, Gretchen, while moving the story along at a perfect pace. This chapter is wonderful. xo
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Ah, Miranda; so tough on the outside, so gooey on the inside. She is just so lovable and RELATABLE, and I love her relationships with the men in her life. You do such a great job drawing her, Gretchen, while moving the story along at a perfect pace. This chapter is wonderful. xo
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Rachelle. I'm so glad you are still able to relate to her. She's definitely more guarded this go round. I really appreciate this nice review. And the extra stars. Been a little nervous with Miranda this time. She's back but she's different. I'm expecting your honest opinion. I know you'll tell me. You've made me feel better. Gretchen
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No, I definitely see growth in her BUT her basic nature is the same. She's a tell-it-like-it is, girl, and you've been wise in that you've shown she's NOT a superhero. She was rocked by all that's happened...but no way would she just cave in to it. I think you're doing it just right. You have SUCH good writer instincts, Gretchen; you can 100 percent trust them.
Congrats, btw, on the release of the new book. I'll be buying it from Amazon as soon as I get done on FS this morning. xoxo
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Yay! I've decided that I'm only going to open your messages on Fanstory today. I'm so freaking happy. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This was a great chapter. I hope I haven't missed anything. I see you have a few of those other re-runs for me to look at as well. When is Miranda and the cop gonna get hitched?
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This was a great chapter. I hope I haven't missed anything. I see you have a few of those other re-runs for me to look at as well. When is Miranda and the cop gonna get hitched?
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Miranda wouldn't be Miranda if she got married. But you never know. Lol. Thanks so much fir this incredible review. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Having a cop as a boyfriend is a two edged sword I guess. She has to take the good with the not so inviting I guess. Aaron seems like a world class nuisance. I would have lost my patience with him long ago. Well done gal. I'm relating to your characters.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Having a cop as a boyfriend is a two edged sword I guess. She has to take the good with the not so inviting I guess. Aaron seems like a world class nuisance. I would have lost my patience with him long ago. Well done gal. I'm relating to your characters.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Tom. I'm glad you can relate to some of them. Aaron would probably get on my nerves as well but Miranda likes him ... in small doses. Lol. Thanks. Gretchen
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very interesting chapter you have penned. You used very good dialogue and very good descriptive words. Sounds like Mitch is a very handsome guy and Cop. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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This is a very well written and very interesting chapter you have penned. You used very good dialogue and very good descriptive words. Sounds like Mitch is a very handsome guy and Cop. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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I just be Mitch is cute. I just love his personality. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Some really complex characters here conveyed through your usual captivating dialogue. You have a real knack of just making them seem so human, such as in that last exchange. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Some really complex characters here conveyed through your usual captivating dialogue. You have a real knack of just making them seem so human, such as in that last exchange. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I am just so happy you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That's much better, Gretchen. The length is just right. I like the fact you worked in a little romance in. Mitch is a nice guy and is genuinely worried about Miranda. Being the Law, he is a good man to have around looking out for her. He needs to listen to her as well. Aron, Preston and Waylon will be more than willing to. LOL Good Job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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That's much better, Gretchen. The length is just right. I like the fact you worked in a little romance in. Mitch is a nice guy and is genuinely worried about Miranda. Being the Law, he is a good man to have around looking out for her. He needs to listen to her as well. Aron, Preston and Waylon will be more than willing to. LOL Good Job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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We know Preston from the book about Terry Joe McKinnon will go above and beyond and I'm sure you're right about the other two. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Mitch should know her well enough by now to trust her instincts, so I was a bit surprised he was dismissive of the character by the dumpster. She's not the sort to imagine things. Aaron's life journey sounds like it will be an interesting one! Well written. I'm always keen to read more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Mitch should know her well enough by now to trust her instincts, so I was a bit surprised he was dismissive of the character by the dumpster. She's not the sort to imagine things. Aaron's life journey sounds like it will be an interesting one! Well written. I'm always keen to read more.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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He will most likely check out the scene. He just wants her to not stress out. But not being believed will do ust the opposite. Thanks for this. BTW, how's your son?
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Thank you for asking. I will do a final post I think. He turned a corner this week and he may go home soon with extra procedures for his care in place. They can?t use a needle to drain his lungs so he will still have a significant amount of fluid there but he?s now managing without oxygen and the infection has cleared. But the medical staff have done all they can do. From here it will just take time for the fluid to be absorbed and the lungs to clear. Thanks again.
Wendy