A Violent Dog
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
This startling entry about a dangerous attacking dog is a reminder of how unpredictable a wild or untrained animal can be. It is a horror story fit for the Halloween season. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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This startling entry about a dangerous attacking dog is a reminder of how unpredictable a wild or untrained animal can be. It is a horror story fit for the Halloween season. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendyanne
I think this reads better now you have made that very simple amendment. Thanks for letting me know about making the change, I wish you good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I think this reads better now you have made that very simple amendment. Thanks for letting me know about making the change, I wish you good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you! I have made the changes. Can you please revise it?