Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Mornings are delightful and I love that time of day when the word is waking up and we enjoy our first drink and eat breakfast, it all makes life worth living and I enjoyed your fine ambient words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am betting if I had a cup of coffee that looked like that, I would be a coffee drinker. I bet so. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem and the artwork choose. I think most people wouldn't want me caffeinated up. LOL

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I am not a big coffee drinker either. Just one cup in the morning. I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Beautiful! I like how this author in a few words wrote an uplifting poem.
The words flow and connect well. And as I think of the sunrise and my
morning coffee, as the author states, the morning is serene. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem, Gypsy!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Hello, my friend. I hope your son is feeling better. This six-word poem speaks of serene mornings with coffee or tea as the sun rises.
This is a lovely testament to the resilience in you, my friend. You bounce back from sadness and offer a warm cup of Joe for the contest. Good luck.
Jesse

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Jesse. My son is home and doing better. I appreciate your kind review.

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reply by Jesse James Doty on 19-Oct-2023

I'm glad.
Thanks for the hugs.
Jesse

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

You prove over time and again that it doesn't take a great number of words to write a beautiful poem. I love the phrase: sunrise in my cup. the picture is well chosen.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Verna. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was such a cool poem. It would make a great coffee commercial. Lol. I'd buy whatever coffee if it promised sunrise in a cup. This was stimulating because of the imagery. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Just six well chosen words can describe that serene feeling so well. "Sunrise in a cup" is a delightful expression and describes that first cup of coffee/tea in a morning as it really hits the spot and the sun rises in our mind and body!! Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Wendy. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge and your presentation is very good, too. You also use evocative words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. I can envision the scene and simple, relaxing moment in time.

Best wishes,

Alexan

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Alexan. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

*plop*
sugar cube melts ~
sweetens life.

a great six word haiku
good imagery with the glowing cup
and brightly coloured word choices

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

thank you very much
for taking the time to read and review my poem
(*=*)
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Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

Gypsy,

A very nice idea for this short word contest! We all look forward to that morning cup of sunshine.

Do like your artwork that accompanies your words.

Mark

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate your kind words and exceptional six stars review.

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