Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Sunday's and Sunrays worked perfectly together for unity and rhyming with this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I enjoyed the entire presentation. Excellent job of writing.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the sundays/sunrays rhyme and word play

with sunday's fresh flowers - thought it was gonna be a happy poem
that turned quickly lol

a great haiku with good imagery, word choice, and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

thank you very much
for taking the time to read and review my poem
(*=*)
gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm not sure why folk decorate graves with flowers, I can think of all sorts of things, but I'm still not sure, only the floral wreaths seem to be consistent with burial, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I liked the rhyming of "Sunday's" and "sun rays" at the start of the first and last lines. And you always give us the surprising perspective at the end like a camera panning out from the details of the flowers to a wider view of the cemetery. Great job!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister. I hope you are having a wonderful day.

love,
marival